guzar jaaye raat kaise..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, May 15, 2009.

  1. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    Feels so good to be back.. hope to have fresh start again..


    guzar jaaye raat kaise..
    sawar jaaye baat kaise..

    jurrate ki hai kar ke unhe pareshan..
    nahi nahi, abhi nahi.. umar hai nadaan..
    saanso me par sulagi hai shonkhiya anjaan..
    kaise karu unko ye armaan e dil bayaan

    ke raas nahi aa rahi hai duriya bhi aise

    guzar jaaye raat kaise..
    sawar jaaye baat kaise..

    aaj tak to aankhose hi ki thi gustakhiya
    chaha tha mil jaye hume bhi saza-e-najdikiya..
    kuch to samjh lo, kya keh rahi husn ki rayaa..
    muh na fero, ke nahi inkaar bass ye hai hayaa..

    yu na le imtihaan, ban ke bekhabar aise

    guzar jaaye raat kaise..
    sawar jaaye baat kaise..
     
  2. distorted

    distorted satan

    Yr previous works were better... newys carry on the job... I know, u'll do better...
     
  3. isnt it sm B - grade movie song ??

    u can do good in bolllywood..cheers
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ^ mona darling ...its a very thin line between erotism and vulgarity ....its for us to understand it ... i belive this poem is quite well wrtten to create the diffrence .... app "onkara" dekho vahan ek aadmi dang se samjahta hai ... specially 4 u the... dhaage bhar ka pharak.....haha


    nimmo is my fav !
     

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