Ghosts Of Midnight...!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Aug 27, 2005.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!



    You have entered
    On the tip of your toes
    Smiling…

    words... words... words

    A regard, two regards,
    a look,… nobody looks at you

    smoke... smoke... smoke...

    They want only their happiness
    They want that you escape

    You are gone out
    With much hurry
    cheered to pursue fireflies
    with the ghosts of midnight
    dancing on the lake….


    Amanush...

    :)
     
  2. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    thats a random thought put to paper with jus the right words
    Again:)

    ur good with words Amanush....
     
  3. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Look For Me...!

    Thanks for the nice comment...Martina!

    Like this one...?


    Look for me

    Look for me in the dark days of your life
    among the fog of mornings without sun
    you will recognize me
    I will illuminate your walk with moments of love
    of sweets thoughts that shine in the soul.

    I will be an instant
    a fragment of your life that’s worth an eternity
    we always will stay in that angle of the past
    in that moment of lived time
    in that garden of the memories…

    Look for me.


    Amanush...

    :)
     
  4. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    woooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!niiiiiiiiceeeeeee!reps for u!
     
  5. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    its says u mus spread reps around....so will do it 2morrow!
     
  6. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    man that was good (both) ...
     
  7. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    wow great work here too amanush....
     
  8. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks to all of you Guys, for liking the poems...

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  9. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Lovely..
    its so beautiful!!
    and i'm outta words...
    Your poems are always brimming with so many emotions and feelings..

    Jus wish you dont have a reason to write any sad poems
    the pleasant ones are always good to read...

    :)
     
  10. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Excellent... I like your style... in both the poems posted here... how old r u?
     
  11. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks for appreciating...Martina!

    I mostly have the tendance to write sad poems...anyway I'll do
    my best to submit some romantic ones...ok?

    Keep coming and take care of yourself

    :)
     
  12. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks so much for appreciating the poems...Esgallindeion!

    About my age...

    Too old to love
    too young to die
    ...(Just kidding )

    I am 50 years old

    :)
     
  13. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.



    50.....u serious kya.....
     
  14. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Kasam khaata houn ki sach kehta houn aur
    sach ke siwa kuch nahin kehta houn...!

    :)
     
  15. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    wow...i guess u the oldest igtian around then.....
     
  16. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!


    Old is Gold...hai na ? :) and New is nice

    :)
     

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