GeT GoRGeouS

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by paranoid13rohan, Jun 17, 2007.

  1. paranoid13rohan

    paranoid13rohan .: iNDiaN iDioT 3.0 :.

    "beauty is truth and truth is beauty" - John Keats


    GeT GoRGeouS

    you don't have to paint your face ...
    you look gorgeous anyways.
    you don't need to spend hours before the miorror.

    all those colour and gloss on your lips ...
    they just fake your smile and kiss.
    beautify your soul if you should dare.

    cleanse your mind, moisturize,
    but never shadow your inner eyes.
    break free from those sticky gels ...
    scrub off your heart's dead cells.

    get gorgeous ...
    babe, get gorgeous ...
    girl, get gorgeous ...
    love, get gorgeous.

    i used to love those curls of yours.
    blue was not your eyes, i'm sure.
    sometimes i feel you are a stranger.

    hey you wannabe beautiful-bold,
    the way you crave for money and gold ...
    makes me feel you're a species endangered.

    menicure, pedicure ...
    you're so ugly, so impure.
    trying to be someone else,
    you've wasted your own self.

    get gorgeous ...
    babe, get gorgeous ...
    girl, get gorgeous ...
    love, get gorgeous.



    "let us live for the beauty of our own reality" - Charles Lamb


    will be looking forward to your comments.
    thanks for reading. :)
     
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  2. anshammer

    anshammer MR. - 2 - MINZ

    hey..u hv written dis???..hmmmmmmm..... dats guud.!! :) ...

    but ..umm..i wanna say smthn 2 u....














    paranoid.. get gorgeous...
    rohan.. get gorgeous...
    oye get gorgegous...!!
    :p

    :beer: njoy.!! keep writing..

    :dance:
    dat was nice..! :)
     
  3. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    I think I'll use this one to break up with my GF:p: Will work like a charm:dance:

    I personally have nothing against women putting on make up..do you know in some cases it actually boosts their confidence!!!And everybody wears a mask to hide their souls so what if some put on one more:p:

    Fun read though:dance:
     
  4. paranoid13rohan

    paranoid13rohan .: iNDiaN iDioT 3.0 :.

    thanx ansh and not_neo for sharing your views.

    @ not_neo ~ neither do i have anything against women putting on make up ... i just wanted to say that it's equally important to put make-up on ones internal features as it is for the external ... i hope you understand.
     
  5. elfascinating

    elfascinating risqué

    Are you my ex-gf Neha?
     
  6. nazr

    nazr angel is my genital..

    Yay who doesnt like beautiful kidneys,dazzling liver,long flowing intestines.et al.
     
  7. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    OMG:shock: ...NO!!!At least let them not mask their internal true self!!!!That should be kept as it is because it is beautiful as it is..:) or at least "putting make up" is a worng metaphor coz it depicts pretense...

    Anyways I commented too much

    :dance:

    ROFL @nazr
     
  8. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    u went inside hes talking about thngs which r out and not beautiful:rule: hahaha

    ur poem ws nice !
     
  9. paranoid13rohan

    paranoid13rohan .: iNDiaN iDioT 3.0 :.

    nevermind ...
     
  10. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    hi that was sooooo simple and good! and u know dats my kinda poem! :) good job man like always!
     
  11. paranoid13rohan

    paranoid13rohan .: iNDiaN iDioT 3.0 :.

    thanx madhuresh & hira ...
     
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  12. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    awesome.. rohan.. really liked the concept... it can be a gud song.. have u recorded it.. ? reps anyway..
     
  13. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Man I have no idea why I'm so uptight these days:p:

    Good poem..good theme...I just happened to comment on it at the wrong time..
    Very nice one..reps..:dance:
     
  14. paranoid13rohan

    paranoid13rohan .: iNDiaN iDioT 3.0 :.

    thanx bish and not_neo.

    @ bish ~ u r right. this is a song. i'll try to record it.
     
  15. rockbabun

    rockbabun New Member

    Gud work!! gr8 concept... Its alwez important to be beautiful from the inside.. :beer:

    RepSS!!! :rock:
     

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