Friendship With A Rose

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Sanjay Mazumder, Mar 20, 2006.

  1. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Friendship With A Rose

    When I find myself alone
    Somewhere in the middle of the ocean
    With no hope
    Far and wide and beside
    The fragrance of friendship
    Gets deep into me
    And I see a ray of light
    Coming down to pull me out
    And show me the way
    To a new horizon
    Full of glory and joy
    Such is the friendship
    Of a Rose, blooming
    And glittering
    In the first sunshine
    With the sizzling dew
    Nodding in the morning breeze
    Singing the song of life…..
    Yes, the friendship with a Rose
    Ended my endless dark nights
    Lapped with agony and aghast
    Giving a new meaning
    To the life
    To shine brighter than the brightest star….​

    P.S. I've personified Rose with Someone whom I love...... Well, it's a long story and already been discussed in IGT in Dec 2004.....
    nimisha, BubblyMartini and apurbajd like this.
  2. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    ^simple n nice :)
  3. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    @apurba, Thanks Bro
  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Something i believe in
    "Memory of love is like smelling a rose......
    the essence goes right to the soul" ;)

    Lovely thought Sanjay!:)
  5. #iR@


    very well ritten! :)
  6. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    good flow...nice imagination!!! :)....I pray that this "Rose" be with you as fresh and beautiful as these thoughts are, forever...!!!
  7. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    seems you r steling from ur own poems..

    last one starting with line.. when sun goes down on me..
    n this one... when i find myself alone..

    then repetetion of some previous concepts..
    but considering individual poem....very good job...!!
  8. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Thanks Bubbly, IR, Sharmon and Nimi.....

    @nimi, I dont know but U might be right..... Actually, my mind thinks in a definite way and so, there may be similarity in my poems. And so, U may find something like that.
  9. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Bhalo khub Bhalo........................
  10. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Dhonnobad Bandhu!
  11. Broken_heart

    Broken_heart New Member

    nice one dude!
  12. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Thanks a lot BH.
  13. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    its Hira :)
  14. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    simple and sweet..good attempt
  15. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Thanks Madhuresh.

    But Bubbly, I really couldn't get ur point. Who is the Hira?
  16. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    5th poster's name #iR@ = Hira!!

    got it?:)
  17. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    But what problem with Hira? :) Any Conflicts? :)
  18. #iR@


    @ bubbly thx for the clearification! hehe :)

    and sanjay ... my name is Hira...
  19. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Hira = Diamond

    U are a diamond......

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