Nothing and no one is going to stop me from loving him...not my parents...not anybody...he's permanantly engraved in my heart...not merely sketched... to be easily erased!....frustration and sorrow and pure love...a mix of emotions created this poem...had to release my stress somehow...check it out and lemme know how's the poem...and more importantly...some emotional support...i am DYING over here!!!! "FOREVER MY LOVE" Forever my love will you be on my mind.... It's been so since the day that our two souls entwined... Forever my love...i'm indebt to you... For giving me such happiness and the love I never knew... Forever my love...i'll desire to ensure.. Your happiness forever...for your heart is so pure... Forever our parents will try to tear us apart... If they tore you from me...they will have torn out my heart... Forever my love...will I cry out and pray... That one day we'll unite...God will make a way... Forever my love...will I wish to be there... and become one with you...and share a life filled with care... Forever my love...I'll seek words to explain... The tug of war in my heart...that is causing me pain... Between my parents and you...they're trying to force me to choose... I'd rather die than make this choice...because neither can I loose... Forever my love...I will always love you... ANd there is no question of what I will do... Though there have been obstacles right from the start... Nothing of this world ....can take you from my heart.... FOrever my love... Forever with me... Engraved in my Heart... for e-ter-ni-ty!!!! love , DIvya
the flawless emotions of yearning .....great work ...the work shows the sentiments squeezing the heart in disbelief of being taken away by destiny..no matter still the mind is still is still on the same path that two souls have walked together.... it is well known love makes any one poet/poetess..and distance makes you feel life is hard....... rohit astroguru26
Hopelessly smitten lover i see :grin:, some of the best poetry comes from people in love, this being no exception, wonderful work. *applauds*
struggling to find words to praise u.......can feel the love in my heart too now BIG HUGS(in my own style, u know me :beer: ) i think i might cry with u rather than comforting u......... awesome, buddy........... :beer: :nw: :nw:
