first kiss...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, Mar 13, 2006.

  1. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    Of course. Who isn't interested in a story where the relater embarresses himself?



    I don't think any guy has ever had a perfect first kiss. Ever!
     
  2. shak

    shak Harrr!

    ^ toooont ...wrong answer ... i've had .. now you can call me a sad person cuz i get jaded too quickly .
    @trish : as the famous saying goes "i'll show you mine if you show me yours" .. or something like that ....
     
  3. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    :shock:................................
     
  4. shak

    shak Harrr!

    ^ aah ... dont take that literally .. i mean .. baah ... leave it .. u/she know what i mean ..
     
  5. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    @Shak, Bravo!
     
  6. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    @shak....
    glad my poem cud make u that nostalgic...:eek::
    yeah... first kiss can never be forgotten..

    mine was unfortunately................hmmmmmm.......better i forget........:NoTalk:
     
  7. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member


    still ur kiss is on my lips:p: ..i mean read manytimes.....

    anyways.......your concept to create the imagination on paper is truly capitivating and uniquely expressive....:beer:

    rohit
     
    nimisha likes this.
  8. waz_wylde

    waz_wylde New Member

    Poem;First Kiss

    HI Nimisha.....

    Its sounds gr8....well i just wanna take ur permission. could i use ur poem for my self composition....i am a guitarist in a rock band...we are now focusiing in our own comps..so if u are really willing to give ur lyrics to us...it'l be really thankfull..

    regards
    Waz
     
    nimisha likes this.
  9. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.


    :eek:: keep this first kiss on ur lips....forever..
    i mean...read it whenevrr u like.....

    n thanks for the comment...:nw:

    btw.... u r very late to reply.....:mad:
     
  10. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    that wud be great to have any of my song composed..
    plz go ahead.. let me know how it turns out....

    u can use any of my poem posted here..but please keep informing me which u r composing..
    i'll wait for u to post it in IGT album...

    good luck....:beer:
     
  11. souman_das

    souman_das New Member

    my first kiss

    hi all and foremost nimisha,

    my memories of first kiss.................

    mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

    still that is fresh on my lips.





    4 panktiyan meri bhi:



    shaam ka chadar ode,aayi thi woh Raat
    saath main tum thi, aur thi nahin hoton pe koi baat
    ungliyon se tha tumhare, maine baalon ko savara
    aur tumne bheecha tha apne hoton ko,
    pake sparsh mere hatho ka pyaara


    uff woh matwali raat aur tumhara saath
    jaise ho aag aur pani ka saath
    jazbaton main hum beh gaye,
    aur ek doosre ke baahon main hum kho gaye


    aaj bhi yaad hain mujhe, woh pyaas se tadapti shaam
    jis din tumhare pehle chumban ne diya tha, is benaam rishte ko naam.






    regards to all and especially nimisha.

    take care.

    regards,
    Souman

    :beer:
     
    nimisha likes this.
  12. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    ^^^
    aapne to bahot kuch kehdiyaa...:nw: :nw:
    souman...so nice of u to go through my poem n then giving ur excellent reply...
    thanks..
     
  13. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Powerful Lines...
    Beautiful poem dear...

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  14. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    A kiss is a lovely trick designed by nature to stop speech when words become superfluous. ~ Ingrid Bergman
     
  15. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    :shock: tht was again erotic one... dude tht's kool .. "chumban" word :cool:
     
  16. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    That's kool Souman!

    Well, Nimisha..... Ur First Kiss is a Hit..... :)
    What abt ur last Kiss? :)
     
    nimisha likes this.
  17. souman_das

    souman_das New Member

    hi sachoo and sanjay,
    thanks for your encouragement and comments.
    this forum is really cool,i did not use to visit this forum but now i am regular with this forum.


    regards,
    Souman
     
  18. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    feels nostalgic looking at my old work!!
     
  19. Welcome back Admin ji, i have been here since 12 years :D
     

Share This Page