first kiss...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, Mar 13, 2006.

  1. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    News flash: I'm a girl.

    And I'm happily..

    ..straight :grin:
  2. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    NO !!!we posted almost at the same time that post i made was for
    ie for merwan's reply to the poem

    y u thought i thought u were ahemmmm:p: :RollLol:
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    @cryptu... that reply from spy was for merwan may be.. n not you...
    btw..u said ryt... im more comfortable at romantic poems.. sensuous may be...

    @spy.... so bhaai.... agar koi line maar raha hai,to kya bachaoge mujhe tum???
  4. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    The "boss" tells it like it is.......good job.
  5. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    fckin hell! :shock:

    tht was.. umm.. well.. a-w-e-s-o-m-e 2 say d least...

    don kno whthr it takes much efrt writin an erotic piece.. just chip in wid some
    ooh aah,
    bhigi raat,
    hato me haath,
    aankho me aankh.... ;)
    erm ok. i'l stop. here.. :eek::

    but this one was erotically, sensually, seductively, divinely, *grabs d thesaurus* majestically, beautifulll........ piece of wrk. :grin:
    ok.. wil stop once agn.. :dance:

    no seriously.. xprssion was awesome in dis poem of urs.
    brilliant! :) fantasy at its best :)

    reps if allowed ;)

    Edit: sprd some reps :eek::
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  6. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    i know.... as i said earlier... "boss" is always right...:cool:
    n i trust this "boss"...
    thanks..for d appreciation

    no worries for the reps...
    u liked it.... thats my pleasure.....
    talking bout such poems..u might like to take look at this page....
  7. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Man .. didn't know people can put so much imagination behind a kiss .. Very well written ..

    PS - A kiss accordin to me is a very special and one of da most beautiful feelin(?) one can experience ! (ofcourse if done properly :p:)

    Reminds me of those first kisses .. where u try to "get it" :p:
  8. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Once again hatts off to u nims... :nw:

    Very well writtn...
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  9. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    if its first kiss.... how one can understand....person is doing it properly or not..

    thats the beauty of first kiss... u dont know what is happening, why is happening.. its just surrederence.... isnt it??
  10. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    Really nice job, nimmo....amazing work....
    hmmm.....i am wondering the inspiration behind your poem...i mean, the person, not the concept...:think:
    Made me remember of my first kiss;)
  11. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    thanks sweetheart...

    hmmm..... keep guessing......;)

  12. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    Dhappi, dey dey ek pappi....... .... apun ko kab milegi jaadu ki zhappi aur phir pehli pappi.... current toh nahi lagta hain na... hehehehe n i m spamming the thread :).

    Feels like the first kiss and it's getting better, baby

  13. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    so it is someone that i know......i think i know the person..but i need you to confirm it for me....i will not make it public..but u have promised me long time ago that you will let me know first if any "romantic" stuff goes on your life...:beer:
  14. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    honey.... writtin poem dont prove...i had that past experience...
    count on me....i'll let you know... when Mr. Right comes... i already gave u hint...isnt it....??;)

    @sachoo.... that baby in ur avtaar is shoooo cuteeee... guess what...he gonna get my jaadu ki zappi as well as kiss..:p:
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  15. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    He has already got loads of them ages ago .... ppl so rude to the cheeks :(.

    He's a big boy now...wanna try again :p: .... hehehehehe
  16. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

  17. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Hi Nimisha,

    I think i never saw this post.
    Poem is absolutely magnificent but with the exception of few spelling mistakes like "virtigo" whereas it shd be Vertigo and "exctacy",the right spelling being ecstasy.
    Hope u wd pay more attention to these minor details.

    rest is awsome.

  18. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    They seem obscure thoughts at first
    but then it hardly matters when the feelings themselves are more or less obscure..
    each line can be read by itself..:)

    Nice poem

    its Vertigo not virtigo
  19. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Bubbly it seems either u dint read my post or we were replying at the same time....guess why.
  20. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Hmmmm.....nice thots (wonder if they r just thots:p:)
    well written...lemme see if i can rep u :grin:

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