First Kiss - A Never Ending Storm..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by horsesmouth, Apr 3, 2009.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Eyes meet for an eternity,
    faces crossed and close.
    A moment of pure eloquence,
    and unrestrained joy explodes.

    An air of patience succeeds,
    hearts out of breath.
    Beating loud and swift,
    and melting with the rain.

    A smile spread across the lips,
    O how beautiful they are!
    And eyes sparkling like fire,
    even in the night so dark.

    They feel each breath,
    pouncing upon the other;
    So close, moist and hot,
    until they meet at last,
    no longer controlled.
    Heads moving in wildness,
    fly quick together up high.
    And minds go off their work,
    resting somewhere in the sky.

    A breeze blows past by,
    brings a weather so calm.
    But they seem so unsatisfied,
    Theirs is a never ending storm.

    No need to explain, says everything! no1 ever seem to stop at that precious moment.......wishes the moment would last forever!
  2. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    thats nice, I liked it.....
    wonder there's no reply since last 3 days, why?
  3. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    i replied..horses mouth, u r a fabb poet!
  4. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    n yea lol.....wel u described emotions rather than the kiss, but dude, you're awesome!
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    @metalhead n allstarsband''

    thnks man!!!!

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