Finding The Meaning!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Jan 14, 2006.

  1. #iR@


    hi! back wid another poem and yes like always looking forward to ur response! and again... just rite wat u think about it! ;) so here goes... hope u guys like it and find something to think about....

     finding the meaning!

    Whatever I look at
    Seems to turn beautiful
    Its just the way u look at it

    Whatever I touch
    Seems to turn into gold
    Its just the way u look at it

    The beautiful colours of life
    To many (ppl) they appear in shades of grey
    Its just the way u look at it

    The attractive flowers
    To many (ppl) they appear wilted
    Its just the way u look at it

    To many (ppl), life appears dull
    To many (ppl), it appears significant
    Its just the way u look at it!

    don't forget to comment... thanks for reading! ;)
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  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    hmm.. "glass half-full or half-empty" kinda poem!

    i like it :)
  3. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    ^^exactly...nice could have made it u know adding some variation like - its just the way u feel it,smell it or sumthin like that...(just my opinion:))

    gr8 goin girl...reps 4 u!!;)
  4. #iR@


    @ cryptic ... had exactly the same quotation in mind wen i rote this... THANKS! :)

    @ hardik.... thanks man.... really appreciate ur opinion! :) thanks for the reps man!
  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    nice thoughts..! its just the way i look at it(ur poem)..
  6. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    i have got two replies either u use a dictionary to find a meaning or u can use this

    sorry yaar but i am tired a bit today ....
  7. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    a short and simple poem...really nice work dear....
  8. #iR@


    @ nimisha... thanks a lot.... yea its just the way u looked at it! ;)

    @ spy..... well... atleast u read it! thanks anyway!

    @ abhi.... thanks man! :)
  9. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    ok today i was free n i read the poem (sorry yest was really tired n in a not so good mood either)

    a really nice work

    not long

    but with some really nice thoughts....
  10. #iR@


    ^ thanks for taking out time for "re-commenting". hehe.... thanks! :)

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