hi.......... do read this poem and tell me wat u think of it........ please make sure that ur reply to this poem is HONEST! u must be knowing by now that all i want from u guys IS AN HONEST OPINION!!!!! : that's all.......... : so plzz DO COMMENT!!!!!!! always looking froward to ur comments................. here goes.... As the sun set’s And gives dawn to a new fear, That I can’t explain, Even though it is there, Yet I am not scared, Yet it restrains me from doing stuff, Scared… yet I deny, As the night falls, The fear, Makes me weak, Makes me feeble, Is it the darkness? Or the soreness, Yet I can’t understand, Trying to face it every nite, I walk alone, I feel the isolation, Yet I deny, And will keep denying, cause this life is just full of fears, that haunt me every nite, yet I deny, yet I move on, facing them on my own… alone… DON"T FORGET TO COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey! Nice poem Wont ask the reason but the poem has a feeling of self inflicted morose loneliness..or maybe its me and my brains relating again You write well... Tk care XOX
^ thanks.... always looking forward for ur response ...... THANKS BUBBLY..... ya it is related to a LOT of lonliness and dejection so it's not just ur brain.... :
hey.. dats a good poem there.... keep it up... But i'd suggest that u shudnt use words like "stuff" in such poems.... kinda reduces d impact... that's jst my opinion...
^ thanks angel..... and after i posted it i thought EXACTLY the same....... i mean i shguold have not used STUFF>..... anyway..... thanks man!
good yaar... but the next time...try writin sumthin funny.... somethin HAPPY... Maybe it would make "U" feel better.... i cant see my friend always scared & upset...cummon...hehehe tc... d poem was really good...
Dont worry about the comments Hira....m bk aftr the weekend...so here is mine.. This one was awesome...may b cos i can relate to that 'lonliness'...cos my best frnd is going thru the same kinda phase....m gonna ask her to read this one. Keep up the gud work :beer:
@ garima..... it's all ways great to hear from u..... THANKS! and tell ur friend that everything will be fine......... DON"T WORRY!!! :beer: @ cryptic..... thanks for the reps gurl!!!!!!!!! :rock:
