Fate of one way Love......

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Gaurav Bhatia, Dec 9, 2005.

  1. Gaurav Bhatia

    Gaurav Bhatia New Member

    When i go to study
    Brain preoccupies with thoughts of buddy,
    Don't know what to do then
    It feels like a sweet custody,
    Sometimes feels nothing is fine
    Sometimes feels like everything is mine,
    This dilemma will kill me
    Somebody tell...does she love me?,

    She looks like a sweet dove
    I am sure i am in love,
    It is going to take my life
    Oh! God pls make her my wife,

    I am missing the way she touch
    She doesn't bother me anymore as such,
    Every minute i feel like cry
    This is for sure i will die,

    Could anybody do me a favour?
    I just want ur endeavor,
    Please convey her this information
    If she can come...its my cremation,

    Up here, in order to satisfy me
    God has alloted heaven to me,
    I requested God not to compell
    Not a big deal for me staying in hell,

    God took sometime to think
    He kept staring me without a blink,
    He then shouted suddenly, where r my gloves?
    I am gonna kill this One Way Love.

  2. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Nice attempt in poetry.. but i hv an advice.. if u r really in one way love..

    Dear Gaurav falling in one way love is like hitting ur head in a wall... until it breaks.. and the irony is that the wall is urs and also the head is urs.. So before hitting it.. just be sure that u r hitting in the right place and with right force..
  3. Gaurav Bhatia

    Gaurav Bhatia New Member

    thanx vishwa for reading my poem and replying.Buddy i wont deny i was in love n it was one sided..but its 1 year old story.......ya i hurted me alot...and bangged by head with wall....but its not so anymore....n m still single..n happy...:)..
    i wrote this poem 1 year back....and it was my first poem...
    i wrote many after that....and kept on improve my poems with every successive poem....

  4. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    hope u did reach 2 way love.......nice poem .....and post more soon....
  5. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    I hope it happens soon........

    good job Gaurav:beer:
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    one way love ..... i feel girls r won they r like any other thing just win them......1 way , no-way love ...padestrians only love....cross road of love ..... footh path love ..... gully love... nukkar love....hahahaha .....red light love ..green light love...yellow light in love can ll be stages..........then some ppl r formula-one-driver in love .....and some dugaamar love...also according to kind of girlfreind...mercedese love..maruti love..truck love..bus

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