HI EVERYONE! ok now this poem was ritten LONG time back... for the student exchange programme we had ANYWAY... so again do read this and give me ur HONEST OPINION! i am sure know u guys REMEMBER IT BY HEART that I ALWAYS ASK FOR AN HONEST OPINION! hehe... anyway... just read it and comment on it! here goes... I CAN SEE THE FEARFUL STORMS… BRINGING THE SINGING WINDS I CAN SEE THE FRIGHTNING DARKNESS… BRINGING THE LIGHT WE SEEK I CAN SEE THE TEARS STREAMING DOWN… BRINGING THE SMILE WE HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR I CAN HEAR THE CRIES… CHANGING TO THE LAUGHTERS WE DESERVE I CAN SEE THE LOVE IN THE EYES… WHICH EVERYONE IS AFRAID TO SHOW I CAN SEE THE PIGEONS FLYING… ESCAPING FROM CHAINS THEY ABHOUR I CAN SEE THE HANDS MEETING… HOLDING EACH OTHER TIGHT I CAN SEE THE GATES OPENING… I CAN SEE THE CHAINS RELEASING I CAN SEE THE PEACE… WE ALL HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR I CAN SEE WE BEING ONE… AND ONLY ONE BECAUSE THIS IS WHAT WE ARE… AND THIS IS WHAT WE NEED TO BE DON"T FORGET TO COMMENT!
@ garima, cryptic, har1s.... THANKS FOR THE APPRECIATION! thanks a LOT! np man..... i HATE IT WEN I CAN"T REP PPL TOO! : hehe THANKS AGAIN any more comments?
something so hard described in word.. you got it in you girl.. keep writing.. good work.. and yea reps coming ur way..
diabolic poem...wonderful...here is my piece i can see on the LEFT of the keyboard the caps lock u think is RIGHT to use... newayz who cares bout that...good work...
