on this valentine day.. to my love.. Entranced....!! 'Rapture' is not THE word, nor 'Ecstasy' is emphatic enough.. too infinitesimal to delineate this moment. so better this charisma lay bare! undressed, to be felt only deep within naked, not to be described, swathed in words.. let the desire rule in aquiescence to virgin pleasure, the zeal pulsating in veins, transceding with every beat..summoned to enthrall.. outcry of bliss! smirk of pain! as enigmatic as it could get.. is this eternity? is this heaven? fantacy? truth? illusion? hushhhh.. now no paronyms are asked.. at altar of love, Two soul entranced....
Very nicely written...though I love simple poems this one was genuinely in need of a good,expressive language.. the words are the key in this poem..taking it beyond simply magnificent and making it entrancing indeed.. This is how love should be.
Can I be you? I try so hard yet am but a poor man imitation. You crack me up :-* quite honestly, the mood struck me more as that of ex-love rather than love. Melancholic rather than ecstatic.
