i'd love to hear this in a song its wonderful.. if you hadnt mentioned that these are lyrics and not jus a plain poem then maybe my view would've changed but either ways it would and does sound good..
my work was to write lyrics n give it to composer.... now its his job to compose it... and its his decision to upload song or not... thanks u all for appreciating my part in it.. i will try to get song uploaded if he allows..
balaaj here nimisha ur nazam (ek junoon)so fulfil of emotion amznz, DETA RAHA FAREEB KOI SADGI KE SATH ITNA BARA MAZAAK MERI ZINDAGI KE SATH WO HUM HI HAIN JO LUB PE SAJAEY RAHEY HANSI KAB CHORTA HAI KON KISI KO KHOSHI KE SATH SOCHEY TAMAAM KHOWAB KI SORAT BADAL GAI DEKHA JO HUMNE ONKO KISI AJNABI KE SATH
KEH DOON KI-NA-KAHOON ISSI KASMAKASSH MAIN HOON AA VAQUT KYAA KAROON ISS ZINDAGI KE SAATH agar app ki nazm hai to definatly very good....kuch vaqut mile to aur kalam share kijiyega..again VAh vah...and irrshaad
@shalabh, garima, balaaj... thank you people..... its all becoz of, i get inspiration n i keep on writting... @balaaj.... that was gr8 u wrote... plz keep posting...
hi nimisha, its great that you are gifted with this skill pf composing such lovely and touchy lines. keep on the good work buddy.but one thing I must say that the lyrics is too long for having it entwined in music,but I would definitely love to(absolutely personal opinion with no intensions of generalisations)read through the long shayries of yours and listen to the musicals of the shorter ones. just an invalid advice................................ sometimes few things are better cherished in its raw form.......... warm regards
^^^^^i know wat u mean to say shantanu.. some words are hard to fit in tune... i know... but thats challenge to the composer..isnt it...!! he shud take that... i have many simle poems too dear... if u'll read all my thread..u will come to know... n i havent posted many things on igt yet..just thinking..those r too simple... but i wud soon share it with u all.... thats so nice to have such an advice from you... plz keep replying.. that helps me to grow better...
