ek junoon...

nimisha said:
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song for a friendship and every relationship close to ur heart..
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ye junoon hai, jazbaa hai, ya khudaayi hai..
mere yaar, aaj mere labon pe geet ban ke chali aayi hai..

saare rishton se badh ke koi rishtaa
jindagi roshan kar de woh farishtaa
dilon ki dilon se ye bandish
mitaa ke nafraton ki ranjish

ruh me utari teri yaari ki parchaai hai..
mere yaar, aaj mere labon pe geet ban ke chali aayi hai..
ye junoon hai, jazbaa hai, ya khudaayi hai..

jaise samundar me chupaa koi khazaana
ruh me dubaa ek ehsaas anjaana
dosti, dillagi ya keh du yaarana
saanso ke sur se gehraa fasaana

dil ki dhun hai ya dhadkanon ki shehnaayi hai..
mere yaar, aaj mere labon pe geet ban ke chali aayi hai..
ye junoon hai, jazbaa hai, ya khudaayi hai..

dard kahi pe, tadpan kahi aur
gum kisi ka, aansu kahi aur
jaam piye koi yahaa pe
zoom uthe koi aur wahaa pe

nasha hai, kasak hai, ya kashish si koi chaayi hai..
mere yaar, aaj mere labon pe geet ban ke chali aayi hai..
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i'd love to hear this in a song
its wonderful..
if you hadnt mentioned that these are lyrics and not jus a plain poem
then maybe my view would've changed
but either ways it would and does sound good..
 
my work was to write lyrics n give it to composer....
now its his job to compose it... and its his decision to upload song or not...
thanks u all for appreciating my part in it.. i will try to get song uploaded if he allows..
 
balaaj here
nimisha ur nazam (ek junoon)so fulfil of emotion amznz,

DETA RAHA FAREEB KOI SADGI KE SATH
ITNA BARA MAZAAK MERI ZINDAGI KE SATH

WO HUM HI HAIN JO LUB PE SAJAEY RAHEY HANSI
KAB CHORTA HAI KON KISI KO KHOSHI KE SATH

SOCHEY TAMAAM KHOWAB KI SORAT BADAL GAI
DEKHA JO HUMNE ONKO KISI AJNABI KE SATH
 
balaaj said:
balaaj here
nimisha ur nazam (ek junoon)so fulfil of emotion amznz,

DETA RAHA FAREEB KOI SADGI KE SATH
ITNA BARA MAZAAK MERI ZINDAGI KE SATH

WO HUM HI HAIN JO LUB PE SAJAEY RAHEY HANSI
KAB CHORTA HAI KON KISI KO KHOSHI KE SATH

SOCHEY TAMAAM KHOWAB KI SORAT BADAL GAI
DEKHA JO HUMNE ONKO KISI AJNABI KE SATH
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KEH DOON KI-NA-KAHOON ISSI KASMAKASSH MAIN HOON
AA VAQUT KYAA KAROON ISS ZINDAGI KE SAATH

agar app ki nazm hai to definatly very good....kuch vaqut mile to aur kalam share kijiyega..again VAh vah...and irrshaad
 
@shalabh, garima, balaaj... thank you people..... its all becoz of, i get inspiration n i keep on writting...

@balaaj.... that was gr8 u wrote... plz keep posting...
 
nimisha said:
this is the song..that gonna be soon composed by one of my friend...
posting here the lyrics...
plz comment... r this lyrics r good enough to compose a song...
my friend liked it.. hope u all too feel same..

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song for a friendship and every relationship close to ur heart..
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ye junoon hai, jazbaa hai, ya khudaayi hai..
mere yaar, aaj mere labon pe geet ban ke chali aayi hai..

saare rishton se badh ke koi rishtaa
jindagi roshan kar de woh farishtaa
dilon ki dilon se ye bandish
mitaa ke nafraton ki ranjish

ruh me utari teri yaari ki parchaai hai..
mere yaar, aaj mere labon pe geet ban ke chali aayi hai..
ye junoon hai, jazbaa hai, ya khudaayi hai..

jaise samundar me chupaa koi khazaana
ruh me dubaa ek ehsaas anjaana
dosti, dillagi ya keh du yaarana
saanso ke sur se gehraa fasaana

dil ki dhun hai ya dhadkanon ki shehnaayi hai..
mere yaar, aaj mere labon pe geet ban ke chali aayi hai..
ye junoon hai, jazbaa hai, ya khudaayi hai..

dard kahi pe, tadpan kahi aur
gum kisi ka, aansu kahi aur
jaam piye koi yahaa pe
zoom uthe koi aur wahaa pe

nasha hai, kasak hai, ya kashish si koi chaayi hai..
mere yaar, aaj mere labon pe geet ban ke chali aayi hai..
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awesome Nimisha :rock:
 
hi nimisha,
its great that you are gifted with this skill pf composing such lovely and touchy lines.
keep on the good work buddy.but one thing I must say that the lyrics is too long for having it entwined in music,but I would definitely love to(absolutely personal opinion with no intensions of generalisations)read through the long shayries of yours and listen to the musicals of the shorter ones.
just an invalid advice................................ sometimes few things are better cherished in its raw form..........
warm regards
 
^^^^^i know wat u mean to say shantanu..
some words are hard to fit in tune... i know...
but thats challenge to the composer..isnt it...!! he shud take that...

i have many simle poems too dear... if u'll read all my thread..u will come to know...
n i havent posted many things on igt yet..just thinking..those r too simple...
but i wud soon share it with u all....

thats so nice to have such an advice from you... plz keep replying.. that helps me to grow better...
 
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