this is the song..that gonna be soon composed by one of my friend... posting here the lyrics... plz comment... r this lyrics r good enough to compose a song... my friend liked it.. hope u all too feel same.. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- song for a friendship and every relationship close to ur heart.. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ye junoon hai, jazbaa hai, ya khudaayi hai.. mere yaar, aaj mere labon pe geet ban ke chali aayi hai.. saare rishton se badh ke koi rishtaa jindagi roshan kar de woh farishtaa dilon ki dilon se ye bandish mitaa ke nafraton ki ranjish ruh me utari teri yaari ki parchaai hai.. mere yaar, aaj mere labon pe geet ban ke chali aayi hai.. ye junoon hai, jazbaa hai, ya khudaayi hai.. jaise samundar me chupaa koi khazaana ruh me dubaa ek ehsaas anjaana dosti, dillagi ya keh du yaarana saanso ke sur se gehraa fasaana dil ki dhun hai ya dhadkanon ki shehnaayi hai.. mere yaar, aaj mere labon pe geet ban ke chali aayi hai.. ye junoon hai, jazbaa hai, ya khudaayi hai.. dard kahi pe, tadpan kahi aur gum kisi ka, aansu kahi aur jaam piye koi yahaa pe zoom uthe koi aur wahaa pe nasha hai, kasak hai, ya kashish si koi chaayi hai.. mere yaar, aaj mere labon pe geet ban ke chali aayi hai.. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- waiting for ur comments...
.. why dont u approach some1 in bollywood -- it badly lacks some meaningful lyricists! .. well ... just a thot I think if its to be sung -- perhaps the following lines could be a little manipulated .. * i think * jaam piye koi yahaa pe zoom uthe koi aur wahaa pe part ..
well... thanks for this indirect appreciation .. :nw: always love getting reply from you.. hope some1 from bollywood catches me... anywyas.. mere proffession se to roji-roti nikal hi jayegi.. n the modification was good.. actually....to fit it wit tune..we need lots modification.. thats a combine job of composer n lyricist.. this poem was just rough sketch..
nimi nimi nimi !!!!!!!!!!!!......................do i need to say any more???? frm my side.... ajj yaha khuda hain, aur jaha khuda nahin hain,waha kal khudega......
@abhi :RollLol: @nimisha Good work.... I dont understand how u people create a poem .... I hav tried it many times .... I couldnt go above ya.. ma..ka..( i hope u got it) anyway keep it up....
Wow another gud one..... "wo kashti jo kabhi paas aati dikhti thi, aaj fir bahut door hai" "meri muthi main meri tamannao ki rakh bharpur hai" I think it can be transformed into a gud song....any composers here.
@metal_fan... thanks yaar... arre tu thodi practice kelis tar yamak che gamak tula nakki kalel... @madhuresh... aapke reps nahi mile abhitak...may be u gotta spread more.. anyways.. ur comments are enough.. thanks.. @pamposh... woh kashti jo kabhi pass aati dikhti thi, aaj phir bhi bahot dur hai.. meri mutthi me meri tamannaon ki raakh bharpur hai.. fir se uthti hai aur ek tamanna, paas aati lahron ke saath.. jab lehre door chali jaati hai,raakh hone ko wo fir se majboor hai.. : cudnt help..making shayari outta it.. it was gr8.... n thanks....
hiiiiiiiii dat was really a owesome work............... really dat was fantastic.... i love ur work ............ u just keep on writing dont go for comments................................................................................................................................................................................... SCREAM OF SILENCE
nimi......without a doubt the lyrics are flawless and have the good description of friendship values.......infact it likes roaring on the top of roof saying it all.........hope the composition will give the best justice to the words that are penned by your fertile brain........waiting for the composition posted in the forum.... rohit astroguru26
@no pain no gain.... thanks... very much.. :nw: yes sometimes..u feel ur work is good.. n u stil dont get comments..u feel bad.. but anyways... appreciation from few also can make u write more.. praise works both ways.. it takes u high..n it can destroy you too.. @rohit... i wont hope..my friend do justice to this song by composing good.. i know,he is good anyways.. i just hope, he is comfortable with my words while composing... : u were late to reply.. but anyways... u replied... it completes my post.. @every1 in igt.. i look forward for more replies from u people.. please criticise..
hmm....i jus undrstud ki reps means increasin ur reputation.rght? i.e., increasin the no. of green dots. rght? how to give u? procedure?
in every post their is a smiley at left hand bottom... click it...for the post u like... n approve the post wit ur comment.. thats how u give reputation...
Nimisha that poem is something which is like on the marks get set go. and it will leave ur memories in a second. ek baat bolon kuch acchi poem likha karo
@madhur.. respect ur honest opinion.. will keep that in mind writting next time.. this time i was not writting poetry dear..it was song with some simple words.. u can see..it has some kindaa pattern too.. heavy words wud have made it difficult to sing..
