Duuriyan.....

Hope the poem says it all....therez a Poll too...to see what majority says.

Kyu ye duuriyan mit.ti nahi
Yeh sarhadein hat.ti nahi
Kyu hai riyasat dushman is pyar kii
Ek yeh andheri raat hai jo akele kat.ti nahi

Yeh faasle hain jo badte ja rahe hain
Or ek yeh milne ki aas hai jo dil se jaati nahi
Do dil hain jo kareeb aa rahein hain
Par ye kismat hai jo inka saath degi nahi

Kyu zindgi saath kat sakti nahi
Kyu do aankhein ek khwab dekh sakti nahi
Kyu karar deta hai zamana isse ek gunah ka
Kyu yeh soch is zamane ki badal sakti nahi

Kya ham ek doosre ka saath kabhi nibha payenge
Ya apno ki khushi ke kiye
Apne jazbaato ko dafn karte jayenge

Kya ham kabhi pyar ka izhar kar payenge
Ya apno ko ghum na ho is wajah se
Ek doosre ko pyar ke badle nafrat hi diye jayenge

Thank You for reading

 

Me...first option.

 

hii garima ,
nice poem....
u kno garima, sometimes the society made unnecessary rules...n i dont think there is any harm in refreshing them time to time ....so i think we shd ve to go against the society and fight for our love.......or whatever matter...
even i m stick to the 1st option too....
abhi...

 

hmm..nice poem!!

most b'ful lines

 

Sounds good specially first two para..........

 

I think i'll shut up. Ye'know.

 

Abhi,Vini, Pamposh...thanks for reading..
@Suhas...i guess i kno y....thanx for reading though..

 

No. The poem itself was good. The theme/message, i disagree with. Thats all.

 

^^toh fir sharma kyu raha tha yaar...yahan koi BJP wale thode hi baithe hain jo faltoo ka shor machaenge

 

its good..
but you are capable of writing better than this

 

This is THE Best. I dont want you to write better!!! reps on your way!!!

 

Thanks Martina... nxt time i wud try to mk it better :grin:

:nw: thanks Amit....nxt time i'll try to mk it better :grin: :grin:

 

Good one garima...i like the third one(para).. that kyun Do ankhein ek khwawb dekh satkti nahin...well said....

 

^^^Thanks alot:grin:

 

nice poem gary.......and yaar i don fall into this zhol poll stuff.....

psst:: wht abt the duurri between ur bay and ur boss ka bay???

 

Kyu zindgi saath kat sakti nahi
Kyu do aankhein ek khwab dekh sakti nahi
Kyu karar deta hai zamana isse ek gunah ka
Kyu yeh soch is zamane ki badal sakti nahi

good lines

and society or any system is never bad or good just find ways through it...
so actually dont fight any one do waht u like

 

Thanks Abhi, Madhuresh.
Abhi....its hardly 2-3 steps away.... :"(