Dosti

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by anum324, Dec 16, 2005.

  1. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    Dosti ka aaina channak kar toot gaya,
    Hum par mitne wala, humien hi loot gaya.

    Khud se jyada us par yakeen kiya humne,
    Aah!uska yeh julm, khud se yakeen choot gaya.

    Muhabbat aur pyaar ke kai jam takraye humne,
    Aaj wohi pyaala-wafa-ka sarak kar phoot gaya.

    Khud ko usse jab thoda sa maanga humne,
    Khud ko khuda samajh kar,humse woh rooth gaya.

    Chittak kar daaman jo sametna chaha humne,
    Junoon-e nafrat uska, sukoon mera loot gaya.

    Kadam akele chal pade phir mudh kar jo dekha humne,
    Saath yaaron, karwaan pyaaron, peeche chooth gaya.
     
    anum324, Dec 16, 2005
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  2. can_i_play

    can_i_play New Member

    nice rthymes.....
     
    can_i_play, Dec 16, 2005
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  3. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    Thanks lot for the appreciation.....wud sing it or play it ur guitar....or so...
     
    anum324, Dec 16, 2005
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  4. can_i_play

    can_i_play New Member

    i wld be glad to listen to it....best luck...
     
    can_i_play, Dec 16, 2005
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  5. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    abey yaar....achha likha hai;)....keep them rolling in:grin:
     
    Garima, Dec 16, 2005
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  6. sharadarya

    sharadarya New Member

    amazing man....great work.....
     
    sharadarya, Dec 26, 2005
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  7. syedtabraiz

    syedtabraiz New Member

    Good one Anum.. Keep it up...!!!!
     
    syedtabraiz, Dec 29, 2005
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  8. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    This one is even better....cant rep u again but......keep up the good work anum324!!:):)
     
    Hardik, Dec 29, 2005
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