dont leave...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Jun 7, 2010.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    tell him dat i hate him...
    tell him dat i don't care anymore...
    tell him that it wont matter if he leaves me...
    tell him that i wont ever miss him...
    tell him that i wont ever interfere in his life ever again...
    tell him i was absolutely fine with it...
    tell him dat i sent my best wishes..
    tell him that i wont b back...
    so dat he may b happy...
    tell him to go on his own way...
    nd i go on mine...
    just don't tell him about the tears i shed while sayin' ol dis...


    i knw dat dis is a peice of bulls***...bt just felt like writin' dis...do cmnt..
     
  2. Although its a like a very common way of peotry ... lots of one way words then a contrast ending... BUT BUT BUT this one seems straight from your heart... i liked it !!
     
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    oh wow!!!...i din' expect u wud like dis at ol!!!...thnk u so much :)
     
  4. Aisa kunn...? i like all kind of thingies
     
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    hmm
    nice
    straight frm the heart......
    i mean.....thoughts came so quickly tht u dint evn get the time to place 'em into words.....am i right?
     
  6. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

     
  7. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    umm...well dun knw...i just feltdat way...nyway its not dat way...den its gud 4 me.. :)
     
  8. benchwarmer

    benchwarmer New Member

    good...good :p ....nice one...
     
  9. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thnk u :)
     
  10. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    this one is absolutely luking like.....written by an adolescent girl!!
    :p
     
  11. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    hehe...thnk u .. :p :)
     
  12. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    I was really dissappointed till I read the last line, it salvaged some bit of it.

    Very ordinary
     
  13. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    ohk....thnx 4 at least commentin'... :)
     

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