Bheed main mili thi aur, bheed main hi kho gayi kuch naye dreams-se need ki dosty bhi ho gayi maan to bahuut tha magar, sooch main doobe huee kiss haqq se kahen ruk-bhi-ja, jab palat ke vo gayi coffee house ke khali cup, aur vo paper napkin jinpe likh ke ban gaye samarth-shabd kahe bin preet ke rivazon ki chemisty ke reaction thoda aur thoda aur bhadha chahat-ka contraction yunn laga-ki jaise-beech tham si gayi ho pavan main nahi, vo nahi, bas nayan aur nayan phir najane kaha se sab taraf dhuaan dhuaan jo vaqut ko manjoor tha The End main vahi huaa.. sab traf the loog aur aavazain thi yahan yahan... tha phata tha bum koii jaane main aur vo kahaan dhoondhane ussi jagah sab tabaaah-dekta huaa jaisae palat ke koi gunaah dekhta huaa bass vahi khada khada raah dekhta huaa do hathili putaliyoon ki chaah dekta huaa...
hey ye iss main end main sab maar gaye hain ...i wanted to do some thing like an abstract art like where u put some straight lines to show arrangement and some fast strokes to show haphazardness ... did i qualify ?
^^you can do that best i guess as you know how you want it to be finding a person with similar thoughts and style is quite a task.. post the corrections/update and its a nice fusion i like it.. the central and underlying theme is well-expressed..
thanke bubbly ji par agar koi nahi samjha to aisa likne se koi fayada hai ?...............this takes me to a question "IS it always necessary for art to be understandable by all and otherwise its useless ?????? "
