Dil ka fasana

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Varshita, Dec 15, 2006.

  1. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Ankhen jhuka, phir bhool ja
    jaise ki kuch bhi na hua
    kal main rahoon, ya na rahoon
    tu rahe sada muskurata hua

    Ankhon mein teri, sapne hai mere
    apna bhi ek fasana bana
    Pal mein woh hasna, pal mein manana
    Khushiyon se mera daaman bhara

    Dil hai dhadakte, ankhen kabhi nam
    Lagta hai din ab dhalta hua
    arzoo is dil ki, armaan humare
    Hai ab chaman kanton se bhara

    Na hosle buland, na iraada banaya
    duniya se phir bhi shikva kiya
    Kuch na kho kar bahut hai paaya
    Ummeed mein jeene ka bahana mila

    Ankhen jhuka, phir bhool ja
    jaise ki kuch bhi na hua
    kal main rahoon, ya na rahoon
    tu rahe sada muskurata hua
     
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  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    app ek hi line pe jaane kitni line likh chuki hain ...kamaal ki baat to ye hai har baar naye vali pehli se jyda compact aur choti ho jati hai..:)
     
  3. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    ^Just like love(If it exists) keeps on reducing with time .. Poem lines too .. No matter who the poet is ..

    sahi bola na Varshita? :)
     
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    nicely expressed ur state of mind

    hmm.. :think:
     
  5. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e <3V/S<3 50 CeNt$

    /!/ ! C E

    E F F O R T !
     
  6. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @ Madhuresh.... I dont know why when I start I have a different idea in mind.. but eventually it turns out to be around one central theme... Guilty as charged :)

    @ Notty... Cant say much.. Thanks for taking time out to read

    @Vini...Thanks... but what are you thinking now??

    @sanju...Thanks dude :)
     
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  7. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    ur welcome dear...well i dunno, just that it made me a lil pensive!
    nothing much :)
     
  8. hmm...........
     
  9. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    When faced with the truth .. people often can't say much but agree ..
     
  10. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    ^^ Not presenting a view shouldnt be mistaken for not holding one !!
     
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  11. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ^^^ this post has 3 nice ideas for a complete gazal ... varishta app hi likh do !
     
  12. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    That means the view you're holding is not presentable ..
     
  13. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    ^^^yaar ab bandh bhi karo...uski taang kheechna..

    n e ways varshita...nice one..yet again
     
  14. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    You seem pretty bad at logics. Anyways before you resort to an extended use of your scarce grey matter, let me just make it clear. I dont wish to involve myself in any debate and waste my time presenting views which need not be told to you atleast.
     
  15. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @ born2tab... Thanks :)
     
  16. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    People who write poems on love are talking about logic.

    *.............*
     
  17. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Well surprisingly yah...
    But since you dont understand love and are pathetic at logics too... you shouldnt really try to question others abilities on both accounts.
     
  18. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Still you persist on tellin me your views .. Strange.
     
  19. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Leave alone logics, you need help with your english aswell

    That wasnt a view. That was my decision !!
    Now buzz off !!
     
  20. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    ^fyne :)

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