hi all...the key to understanding this poem is to look at it with creativ/naughty eyes...its not wat it seems on surface...nomad isnt a nomad desert isnt a desert...keep this in mind and read the poem and see where it takes you... (let's say this is a new approach at erotic poetry from me since i usually say things directly...) so comments and suggestions plz!!!! There once was a nomad...young wild and alone... In quest of a desert to conquer and make his own... To lie beneath him on these cold starry nights... To fill all his journeys with all imaginable delights... Then one day to him the moonlight revealed a surprise... Which sparked a passionate fire in the lone nomad's eyes... Before him lie a vast desert completely unravelled... Its hills never touched...its valleys never travelled... It lie before him in all its glory...naked vast and stark... Oh how he longed to travel it all in the eve's sensuous dark... Before embarking on his journey...he bent ovr his new land... Running his fingers over and through the silky smooth sand... And in the delight that this new land was all his... He layed atop his desert placing kiss after kiss.. Basking in joy the nomad shuts his eyes... Listening for the pleasant sound of the sweet desert's cry... He arises and begins to travel moving down south... His journey developing a sweet thirst in his mind and mouth... What his eyes beheld next brought a hault to him soon... Beneath him lie his desert's two faultless sand dunes... Unable to resist them he gives the sand a squeeze... As the sand runs through his fingers the desert sends a sweet moaning breeze.. Atop these golden dunes he presses his sunkissed face... That at once begins to soften in the dune's warming embrace... He continues his journey south to find what he does crave... the treasure hidden within the desert's much coveted cave... It is here the noble nomad from his stresses becomes free... He penetrates the cave and reaches a state of ecstacy... And in the cave the nomad chooses to spend the rest of that night.... And its comforts take him into pleasant dreams...and an everlasting emotional flight.
when u said u were gonna post it.never thought this soon..........well, good going.....anyway, thanks for explaining earlier it to me.......It was just plain amussing though.........so good., indeed....Also, i like the imagery and the usage of bright vocabulary
classic interpretation as well as the distinct style keep the feeling floating and lingering in senses....... rohit astroguru26
thats really..extraordinarily n exceptionally good... it has so much of imagination so much of good words...still it dont lose its rhythm.. it has continuous flow of the feeling..unbreached... sorry..if im out of words to praise...
Mind Blowing .. Great imagination .. amazin style .. totally erotic .. i'm outta words .. !!!!! :nw: :nw:
awesome i should say.....great style...as style should be actually.....!!!!now this really looks like poetry.........great work....
I always said.. Divya u are the best in IGT when it comes to poetry.. No one.. I bet No one can write better then this.. u rule the world of imagination.. u rule the world of fantasies.. and above all u rule.. my heart...
@nik....ur a genious... @my baby vishwa...if i write good poetry...its just because yur my inspiration...having yu in my life...i feel i can conquer anything...no poem can summarize wat i feel for yu...yu mean the world to me.... @ evrybudy else....thanks for all the compliments...but i want criticism and suggestions too!!!!
y u all guys suddenly so ***dup ??? no offences included.. but i wanna know.. is this everyones mating season ??
hmmmmmmm kuch kuch he samaj ayyaa baki wen bouncer i jus ducked lol anyways wht evr i got thru was kinda kool lol :x
