ah! there should be many mistakes in it..can be improved a lot..acc. to me..but sadly i couldn't do that myself...haha..suggestions are very welcome.. there was i .. a leaf..a newborn leaf born with faith, life of purpose and belief The cool wind did always sway pass over every branch..everywhere where i did lay I was gentle and sweetly delicate overwhelmed with enthusiasm over my shining fate i had a hundred brothers over there hanging on the same old tree that everyday we share showering sweet swaying love over one another it was a huge huge family with the old tree as our dear mother we played and we swayed and laid together and when some bird visited us we caressed its feathers living every moment none of us did ever lament i felt important..and i felt loved..i felt cared for the bonding assured me everyday that i had nothing to be afraid of.. through the summers...the burning sun we did shine in winters we shivered..but would grin when the cuckoo visited us at the vespers nine and then came the autumn our mother was sad and none of us grew up enough to know why! and she never told us that what she hid beneath her eyelashes and why did she lie and acted so shy soon i woke up to a shock, to ab appalling reality from my sweet dream and to my horror...my mother sobbed and then she silently screamed i noticed it all and before i realized i had a great fall.. i was down on the ground , i knew i was to die as i was the first one to be there in my heart..to be with my mother i continuously made my silent prayers my brothers then forgot about me.. my mother soon got busy in a spree completely ignoring my agony and there was i with a silent promise in my heart a promise to be with my family and to never be apart i lay there..dead, tortured, separated. dejected, cut off and forgotten but with hope i close my eyes but it soon dies down..with me..it now lays rotten..
but its about the leaf and it died? sooo ..how would i continue it..i mean i can.. but for the other leaves maybe..umm..ill surely try
Maybe you can write how after dying the leaf went to heaven, where she met the fellow leaves having an orgy... which made her think that dying is the best thing that had ever happened to her... and you have a happy ending to your story... :