Has someone ever been out of contact with you for even the slightest amount of time ...and you start to worry???..Even i have left people in suspense before... well here's a poem about the torments of suspense... "Deadly Suspense" minutes...hours...days have passed... since I have heard your sweet voice last... this deadly silence...this pain too great... i'm dying each moment i'm forced to wait... unaware how you are...my heart's burning like hell... my happiness exists...only if you are well.. my body's still living...within my soul's dying... outside ever smiling...inside ever crying... my concern for you is much too immense... you're killing me slowly by keeping me in suspense... all this time without word... gets me thinking too deep... my thoughts turn to worries that keep me from sleep... questions start stabbing and shredding my heart... is your silence due to wrongdoing that came from my part?... if its something I did...something I said... Or if you've been fine ...and it's all in my head... bring me out of my worry...and these painful thoughts... By just one word from you...that I should worry not... COMMENTS N SUGGESTIONS PLZ...(is this how you all feel when in suspense too?or i am weird...)
good one... no heavy words..but still effective.. really gooodddddd...!! @madhuresh.... u look so sweet in that avtaar.. so innocent.. muahh..
nice thots divya.....i dont kno y i cant thnk of writing poems on different emotions....its only Love & pain for me....may be these two go hand in hand isliye.....
Oh so ur annoyed .. then perhaps ur gonna kill me for wat i forgot to say earlier .. not juz "Pain In Love" but PAIN IN EVERYTHING!!!! :
avtaar ki kismaat to bahut achhi hai yaar.....not only in that avtaar i am innocent so plz ek baar mujhe bhi...seriously :beer:
