Cool age girls

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Nov 10, 2005.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    This is a simple tune all togeather
    on guitar G C F progression with simple 4/4 strumming
    down up down up down up mute

    Title : cool-age girl

    tu tu ruru tu
    tu tu ruru tu
    tu tu ruru da ra raa
    tu tu ruru tu....

    on monday shally is red, pinky wears blue,
    megha is always messy like she comming from a loo !
    they all think im a dumbo, a bit out of the race
    im freaking some-where with the boys, don't even get good grades !
    i sit below stairs, with my face covered with books
    whenever the pass they pause a bit and giver me horrible looks !!
    i consentrate on work ( say word by word)
    which always comes handy !
    they walk above from down below
    note the color of their panty !!

    coool age girls ( sing like an opera singer)
    they r smart and me a foool
    teach me somethings new
    'cause i can only sing tu tu ruru tu

    tu tu ruru tu
    tu tu ruru tu
    tu tu ruru da ra raa
    tu tu ruru tu....
     
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  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    i think so too :p:
     
  3. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    and i forgot to say...

    it's crappy

    esp:
    :annoyed:
     
  4. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    its funny...and dont mind comments frm females...

    they are impulsive :p:
     
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^^^:annoyed:
     
  6. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    Originally Posted by madhuresh
    they walk above from down below
    note the color of their panty !!


    i loved this one ... :RollLol:
     
  7. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^^^:annoyed: :annoyed: :annoyed:

    **leaves**
     
  8. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    post a recording madhuresh....lets here you sing this...:p:
     
  9. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    Sorry...but i think its could fit into nothing more than a pop song.
     
  10. dennis

    dennis The Bhangra King

    haha...funny
     
  11. shak

    shak Harrr!

    crap ... total rubbish ... mind you i dun patronize people ..
     
  12. shak

    shak Harrr!

    time for me to disect this one .. cuz its horrible ..really .. i know i am being nasty .. but i cant help it ..

    tu tu ruru tu
    tu tu ruru tu
    tu tu ruru da ra raa
    tu tu ruru tu....

    typical noob style intro to a song .. come on mate .. 70's are gone .. been there done that .. come up with some thing new. .

    *on monday shally is red, pinky wears blue,

    now this very strange ...shally! .. neva eva heard this sort of name before .. shelly, shelby, selby, sally, etc .. but not shally! .. phew .. and pinky wears blue? so ironic isnt it?

    *megha is always messy like she comming from a loo !

    now again .. megha! .. whats megha!!? anyway ... comming is spelled "coming" .. and you dun necessarily have to look messy if you visit the loo .. i mean ..we all do that dun we? everyday perhaps? .. do we look messy due to that? i dun think so ..

    *they all think im a dumbo, a bit out of the race

    i can see why .... not your fault .. tut!


    *im freaking some-where with the boys, don't even get good grades !

    now let me concentrate on the first bit .... i am freaking, somewhere with the boys .. right .. notice the punctuation? i know i have done that .. but see what this seems to mean(i am freaking with the boys somewhere out there.. )? i know i am infering what i want but still ..doesnt it sound a bit homo to you? ...

    *i sit below stairs, with my face covered with books

    now remember .. your face is covered with books .. make a note of this ..wil lcome handy later ..
    right ... you are sitting below the stairs ..whatever that is supposed to mean .. but i think its ..BEHIND the stairs .. khair ..
    so either you lie down on the floor so that the books reach your face OR .. you hold the books upto your face .. in any case .. you look stupid.

    *whenever the pass they pause a bit and giver me horrible looks !!

    aah ok .. another spelling mistake..but i'll pass this one as a typo :) (i am so generous) .. they pause and care to look at you! .. nevamind the looks .. but the state you are in .. i would be surprised they even notice you! behind the stairs in a funny position .. probably freaking out with guys!!! :shock:

    *i consentrate on work ( say word by word)

    again spelling .. but lets ignore that ... right .. concentrated on work .. i wonder why? you dun get grades .. so either you are a complete duffer or you are lying that you are concentrating on work ... now .. say word by word ,... huh! i see only one WORD!!! i think you mean .. syllable!


    *which always comes handy !
    they walk above from down below
    note the color of their panty !!

    one word ... pervert! ...
    and remember that note that we made? your face is covered with books .. you cant possibly see the knickers! :p

    *coool age girls ( sing like an opera singer)

    whats a coool age girl? i still dun understand!!!! .. sing like an opera singer! for god sake .. spare us the pain .. dunt!


    *they r smart and me a foool
    teach me somethings new

    they can be smart and you are a fool .. i agree...
    teach me something new? na mate .. you are hopeless

    *'cause i can only sing tu tu ruru tu
    yes we can see that .. and considering your state ... its a miracle that you can manage even this!


    sorry if i was harsh .. but its all in a good sporty fashion :)
     
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  13. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    ^^:RollLol: :RollLol:........ :boff: srk...:rock: :nw:
     
  14. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    @shahrukh
    :RollLol:
    man u had me LMAO right in d mornin!! hehehehe...
    reps 2 ya 4 this!

    @madhuresh

    once again, :annoyed:
     
  15. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    @srk wooooooow
     
  16. Mr. Scary

    Mr. Scary Bass-tard Child

    You=the ***, dude I think I just laughed myself into getting a hernia.
     
  17. ReBoRn

    ReBoRn New Member

    @madhureash - cool, that was a funny poem from you yet again!
    @srk - take it cool man, its justa poem afterall :)
     
  18. Ankur_Scorpio

    Ankur_Scorpio New Member

    @ SRK....everything aside!! dude u have hell of a time in life!! wish i had even half of tht....
     
  19. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    awesome post mortem shahrukh.........good one u did of thth crappy poem......i hadnt read anythin crappier thtn this...and i thought i wrote craps.....man there is someone who can write crappier thn me.......once again SRK, goodone....
     
  20. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    @madhuresh, i just forwarded the poem to the rest of my university...Each time i get back a reply i'll post it here so you can get some unbiased feedback
     

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