thedyood said:
well thank you for the death threat, but i lacked the equipment so it sounded bad. what can you expect from laptop speakers and no fx ?
may be when i own or can access it, i will record it and then put 'em up for comments.
donations for the equipment will be accepted
cheers
Its not abt the equipment man! U can make it sound much better....way way waaaaay better than that on acoustic guitar itself - try checkin out Floyd's acoustic version of the same song, if u dont believe me...
U want feedback, i`ll give u feedback - but plz ensure tht u take it well and work harder to improve...
U`re timing is seriously fcuked up man! Ur bends are awry - all u`re doin is hitting the right notes most times, but the timing is bad, the bends are bad.....and tht totally ruins the song.
Wht u shud be doing, assuming frm ur playing tht u`re a nOOb, is to
a.) Pick up ur acoustic and practise ur lessons on tht
b.) Hope u have a Melbay or a Manoloff or something..... play tht day in day out
c.) Play scales - i never did tht and i still repent it - scales will help u know ur fretboard better and move faster and smoother.
d.) Dont pick up electric songs if u dont have a processor - try honing ur skills on acoustic songs
e.) Finger exercises man !!! Bends, slides, some Finger Gymnastics will certainly help u...
Dont blame lack of instruments man! I connect to my comp too....skill and technology are totally different stuph! I know my shit to know the difference! :lol: