Calling It Quits Dont know what to say about this one. Read on....n give ur comments Her smile dried long back And Innocence left way behind Emotions were all forged when Life lost its essence in its foray Silence started screaming for a life No words no acts no people Could give solace to her soul Loneliness had built a castle of its own She steered through the darkness In search for armistice When life asked for a narration Her heart had no words Embarrassment for the choices made Regret for the life lived But love for the people she met Whose remembrance haunted her Time and again There she stood now With a knife in her hand Pain in her mind, doughty eyes For she could bear no more Masochism wasn’t a relief She yearned for the closure Her eyes cried for help For this pain to end For her broken heart to be one It remained a forlorn dream Decided to extend her hand Wanted to reach out to me I didnt want to With one slit blood dripped down her fist She looked right at me Calling my name again and again I wished her to go away Leave me alone, I cried Didn’t deter her will, She didn’t stop, seemed fearless Sudden silence embraced the room There she was on the floor Don’t blame me, I had warned Then why she laid cursing me Through the pieces on the floor I don’t need the girl in the mirror Not anymore in my life I won’t have one now Just called it quits
@spygame... that link took me to some member's profile... anyways... thanks for replying cos not many seem to be liking it !! @alpha...arree yaar sab poems ko meri life story kyon bana dete ho :cry2:
schitt...i thaught ur quitting writing poems again...:annoyed: so u registered a domain name also... varshita.net PS--ur blog can use a bit of prose too...too much poetry is boring
sadu.. :.. yeh ho nahi sakta yaar why would i make a whole thread abt quitting poetry : Well yaah..i got that site ... i didnt have to do a thing.. just mentioned it to a friend last night.. n he gave it to me fully functional in 10 minutes flat Once i got it.. i had to spend next 2 hours trying to figure out how to handle the back end :grin: Till now i ve just posted my poems... will start blogging from today
.......................................................................D, me too fallin short of words...tht was one hell of poem...and how did ya manage to do it kal nite ko???????????? ..........o gawd,im still searchin for words..this is ur best one as regards to darkkkkkk...quite a dark poem....but i didnt use the torch....
That was just to say....that i was running short of words when i read that poem...it was the darkest i read from u....nice indeed....but it left me with a pain....
Damn.....that is one awsome poem............complete in every sense. I wish cd criticise u for smthng. The best from u so far.
@abhi... he he he...kyon torch kyon nahi use ki?? battery khatam ho gayi kya :.... Why couldnt i have done it last night? : Ironically all my poems have been written at night.... raat ko soya poet jagta hai Thank u so much for considering it to be my best work so far @ garima... I m glad u liked it... and the fact that it left u speechless... now thats the best compliment you guys can give to me. ... But why did it leave YOU in pain? @pamposh... Thank u so much. Please dont raise the standard bar once again... as i cant match it everytime. Accidents do happen... maybe this is just one of them
@ garima... do let me know @ sharmontime.... u want a few more adjectives??... to fill in before typing etc : Thanks anyways
nice -= its real nice...but i duno - i didnt like the "she was..." stuff...never liked such poems - but the story line was nice...the last part - Just called it quits - that rings in...real strong...reps#
