Now that i a look at my years back and ahead i dont find much music in my heart less amusement in my head and i do decide will end this life if comes a glory that size they come along & hold my hand & say my Oh! boy this is wrong Bonds of Blood eternal ties? haven't they always made me weak they r selling thier oldness & all they done like a beggar to priest Bonds of blood they are bloody strong thirsty of a name to row bonds of blood they are preety wrong i care but will let go...
Undeniably, your poems always leave me with a smile on my face. The smooth rhymes and simple words convey your ideas very well. Awesomely written. Keep it up! \m/
IS urs a Buddha smile.... On questions aimed at him to anwer about the subjects he choose to remain silent..the Buddha use to smile and this has been used by may to symbolise someting secret....is urs also the same ??
great poem! pretty nice and concise with its idea @Poison \m/???? seriously? what a douche bag : maybe i should start signing all my unpleasant posts with PEACE at the end Edit: PEACE
^i feel its a question of intellectual honesty ...one must share the unpleasant equally vocalizing the shades of grey . nahi??
its great stuff... and sig-wars? seriously, smileys are the worst ways of depicting emotion...u can easily lie and never get caught.. I use them anyway...like with the tide...