Bonds of Blood

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Sep 28, 2011.

  1. Now that i a look at my years
    back and ahead
    i dont find much music in my heart
    less amusement in my head

    and i do decide will end this life
    if comes a glory that size
    they come along
    &
    hold my hand
    &
    say my Oh! boy this is wrong

    Bonds of Blood eternal ties?

    haven't they always made me weak

    they r selling thier oldness & all they done

    like a beggar to priest


    Bonds of blood they are bloody strong

    thirsty of a name to row

    bonds of blood they are preety wrong

    i care but will let go...
     
  2. Poison...

    Poison... New Member

    Undeniably, your poems always leave me with a smile on my face. The smooth rhymes and simple words convey your ideas very well.
    Awesomely written.

    Keep it up! \m/
     
  3. IS urs a Buddha smile....
    On questions aimed at him to anwer about the subjects he choose to remain silent..the Buddha use to smile and this has been used by may to symbolise someting secret....is urs also the same ?? :p
     
  4. Poison...

    Poison... New Member

    No. It's a happy smile. Like -> :)
     
  5. Morbid_Angel

    Morbid_Angel Sid the sloth

    great poem! pretty nice and concise with its idea

    @Poison
    \m/???? seriously? what a douche bag :p:

    maybe i should start signing all my unpleasant posts with PEACE at the end ;)

    Edit: PEACE
     
  6. ^i feel its a question of intellectual honesty ...one must share the unpleasant equally vocalizing the shades of grey . nahi??
     
  7. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    its great stuff...
    and sig-wars? seriously, smileys are the worst ways of depicting emotion...u can easily lie and never get caught..
    I use them anyway...like with the tide...
    :p
     

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