COMMENTS N SUGGESTIONS PLEEZ...! "Blessed Smile" People smiling all around... Looking deeper ...much feelings found... A smile can be a quick disguise.... for one whose heart in sorrow cries... A smile can be a warning sign ... that someone's got a naughty mind... A smile that's framed with cheeks blushing red... can be since their biggest most secret's been said... A smile ear to ear with their eyes all a-daze... Is seen worn by a dreamer ...dreaming of his craze... A smile paired with two shiny eyes filled with hope... shows one seeking a method by which the can cope... A smile you may see that you're the cause of... another of pure joy from someone you love... Once hidden beneath two lips...now emerging with style... This contagious thing...This great blessing... This expression called a SMILE!... One's precious smile one should not conceal... Since above all the Smile has the power to heal... At sight but a Smile....but much more it conveys... spread your blessing worldwide... SMILE and brighten each day!... AFTER THOUGHT: SOME PEOPLE MAY GET A GREATER AMOUNT OF JOY FROM SEEING YOUR SMILE...THAN THE AMOUNT OF JOY THAT FIRST PUT IT ON YOUR FACE..SO SHARE YOUR SMILE!...MAKE SOMEONE'S LIFE FEEL WORTHWHILE!...-LUV, DIVYA....
the 1st para can be associated with some of the IGTians...1st two can easily be related to bubbly and notty nice to see a happy-happy poem... surely smile is the best gift one can get...keep writing Divya!!..
That's really great, divya. Marvelous, you are blessed with natural scent of thougths, which relaxes the disheartened lives. We cry ourselves, we smile ourselves. We know what is the worth living, keep on smiling and spread the thought of joy everywhere.
can i say that i inspired you to write this wonderful poem with my wonderful smile when i see u :grin: (i will take the good things about my smile only though) it is such a nice poem........no words to praise u........u r just plain awesome...... :beer:
Quite lovely. I've come to this forum after ages and this was a wonderful first read. If there was anything at all to bitch about....it was grammar (but I'm only nitpicking). My favourite "smile" poem is this...thought I'd share: https://www.indian.cl/incredible/smile.htm
