black sabbath paranoid solo

hey hii...i wanted some suggestions on my paranoid cover..
Im playing my own improvised version instead of the original one...wat do u guys think of it???
Im posting a midi file

 

How will a midi show me how you've actually played it?

 

I think a midi is a bad idea if you want opinions on how it's sounding.

 

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take our the spaces in the link...i wasnt allowed a link
here...the vocals are missing.....

 

I think it still sounds like a midi over a backing track? Maybe it's my soundcard that's screwed up.

Talking only about the feel, I think it's okay(of course, I have a different tone in mind). To be honest, I'm not a fan of the original solo either.