Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Apr 3, 2006.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    He is a small fellow
    but doesn’t looks cute
    neno-teck divine miracle
    enjoys to play flute
    six legs two wings and a sting
    all kind of controls in flight
    irritates u to ur limits
    when u wanna say good night
    i think he has no eyes
    or a very small brain
    i kill his friends, put them on show
    but he comes and bites again
    increasing in number 'cause has
    No one above in food chain
    Coils mata r sutta daruu
    so masty no refrains
    if i ever become a scientist
    then will make a drug 4 sure
    wich will make these creatures extinct
    saale "macchar" u will be no more....
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  2. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    kool one :) , reminds me one of machhar chalisa. a senior wrote for skool magazine ..forget tht tho..

    roz raat madhur sangeet sunaate..some blah blah.... tum ho khatmal kay mama ... n something... :p:.

    do try in hindi.. wud be more funny.
  3. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    lol...lagta hai raat ko bahut macchar kaat rahe the....
    he he ..nice..:)
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    @sachoo....hindi main main inko vo gaaliyaan duun bas ...i hate machaarrrrrrrrrr
    @ ye maccharoon ka computer screen se kuch na kuch to nata hai.....saale itna jara sa khoon pete hain aur itna tej kaatate hain.....
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Try using the new n improved odomos, it even smells better!

  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    @Cryp....... u dint got to the crux of the prob babe,

    jab neend nahi aati, akele bistar pe
    Koi to chaahiye iilZaam dene ko...;)

    bjr likes this.
  7. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Bistar pe akele hi neend aati hai.
    Kissi ke saath ho to soyega kya?
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  8. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    oyee jyada nahi aaj mangal hai......will comment later
  9. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    just a thought,...if its NEW, how can it be IMPROVED???...he he

    btw its Moe in ur avy..;)
  10. #iR@


    something different & nice!
  11. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    ek macchar...
    bass ek macchar...
    madhuresh ko poet banaa deta hai..
  12. enable_vipin

    enable_vipin Rhythm_Guitarist

    nice poem dude...when i read this (Bhunnnn) title i thought it must be bengali song....
  13. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Well, it's improved so as good as new :grin:

    <3 to you..
  14. uj_6string

    uj_6string Nickelodean Addict :D

    funny....nice one!keep it up!:beer::nw:
  15. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    vipin , nimish, kryptic, uj, ir, hardic...thank u.......but iam serious this mcchar thing is pathatic
  16. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    bahut achche....wat a magnificent rhyming.

    kya machchar i mean kya poem hai.
  17. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh


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