Bhuladey Mujhey.......My Own

Hi...... recorded this few weeks ago......jus sharing it now

Bhuladey Mujhey
https://www.soundclick.com/rukh

My own composition and lyrics.........and ofcourse my own voice and guitaring...........well actually its jus the main verse and the 1st first in this song.........have to come up with some more lyrics to make it complete...........i hope i get some feedback over it!!

note: dont relate the lyrics with the state of mind i had when i wrote these.........it jus happened : no thoughts

btw i've recorded an instrumental of this song with DRUMS..........i'll post it later if the song sounds good enuff for u guyz

Enjoy!

 

Its nice composition man, can really feel nice melody goin with it.

Feedback :

1.) Try to find sequence of words that fit in the tune so feasibly, that u dont need to pace ur vocals in one line, n slow them in other, speed of vocals shd be constant.

1.) When u sing "bhula sakey toh bhula de mujhe" u tend to sing like "bhula sakey toh BULLA de mujhe"

Though, this is just what I think.

Good work man, i Loveeeeeeee self compositions... come up with more if u have. Will try to rep if i can!

 

hmm nice feedback........yeah i agree at some parts there were loads of stuff filled up......but well couldnt think of anything better.............yeah but the main idea was to get the rhythme right.........n u kinda liked it too so i guess im on the right track ...............lyrics.....umm well any help ?

 

hmm over 40 views...............and over 30 downloads from my soundclick page ..........and still i dont get response? ppl getting really KANJOOS with responses!!

 

:think: bumping it!!

 

add more spice dude!! hidden leads n like all tht stuff it would be more catchy n attractive

 

aaroh's zindagi cover was really gr8 !!! rock on....

 

^^ yeah loads needs to be done on bhuladey mujhey.................thanx for appreciating zindagi intro

 

bumping again