bhoole wale se kahe de..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by raj_aryan, Feb 1, 2005.

  1. raj_aryan

    raj_aryan Moderator

    Bhoolne waale se koyi keh de zara
    is tarah yaad aane se kya faaida,
    Jab mere dil ki duniya basaati nahin
    phir khayaalon mein aane se kya faaida
    Kya kahoon aapse kitni umeeden thi
    Aap kya badle duniya badal si gayi,
    Aasra de ke dil tod te hain mera
    Is tarah sataane se kya faaida,
    Chaar tinke jala ke kya mil gaya
    Mit sakana zamane se mera nishaan,
    Mujhpe bijli girao to jaanu sahi
    Aashiaan par girane se kya faaida
     
  2. nunusword

    nunusword New Member

    hey really really nice...
    u know i love putting a tune to lyrics...so let me know if i could use your stuff to write a song...who knows what'll turn up?
     
  3. skaw

    skaw snooze

    woah , another gud stuff ...

    u noe u shuld title it 'kya faida'

    and

    "Mit sakana zamane se mera nishaan,"
    sounded better when i said it like:
    "Mit na saka zamane se mera nishaan,"
     
  4. raj_aryan

    raj_aryan Moderator

    yes, tht's a good title, i have nt select a title fr it. And ure's 1 seems accurate, bcos the words 'kya faaida' is there after every alternate lines..
    bt truely, i thnk shayari's don't need a title ,as they are mediums of expressing feelings,, and they are nt poetry.
     
  5. atthanii

    atthanii Theif Slayer

    hahahahahaha....are u serious?...dis is not urs.....hahahahahaha.......it can't be..i know it for sure..i can give you ma 101%.......don't steal aight...no no ...i m not claiming it's mine either but i know for sho dat dis isn't urs...
     
  6. raj_aryan

    raj_aryan Moderator

    @atthanii- haaaa haaaaa lol !!!!!!
    this guy is always ready accuse others. Hey, mate , if u post me the site frm where i took the shayari, or frm whom i took it,, then i will give u 500 ! points.
    otherwise don't post this type of dirty quotes.. !!!!
     
  7. atthanii

    atthanii Theif Slayer

    check out the bold letters...and da source is....
    http://www.ejalgaon.com/shayari/
    i hope u r happy now....and gimme ma 500 points... :p:
    World Favorite Shayari Collection#4(97)

    Bina aapke ankhon mein nami rahti hai, Hame hamesha aapki kami rahti hai, Dil se aati hai bas ek hi awaj jane kab honge aap hamare pass......
    (From: Neeraj - Delhi) Agar me mar bhi jaoo e dost,tum gum bhi na karna,asoon bhi na bahana,arthi bhi na uthana,bus Seedhe uper chale ana.. PARTY KARENGE
    (From: Rambo - Jaipur)
    (From: Vivek Manchanda - Lucknow)
    - Izaajat aap de, toe tarif mei aapki, kuch hum farmaye,
    Mahobbat aap de, toe ush dil ke, thoda karib hum aaye,
    Aapke khatim banke aapke har farman ko apnaye,
    Sikayat gar aap kare, toe dil ki dhadkan, kanhi tham na jaye...
    Logo ne dharati dekhi, amber dekha,
    Mausam dekhe aur jivan bhi dekh liya;
    Humari yeh najre aur kya dekhe,
    Jisne aapka yeh hasin chehra dekh liya......................... Jabh jindagi sajati hei toe, dulhan si lagati hei,
    Jabh yeh rang badalti hei toe, ek bewa si lagati hei,
    Yeh be-raham toe kisi se bhi, vafa nahi karti hei,
    Phir bhi sabhko yeah, mehbooba si lagti hei...
    Sheeshe ke dil mei thi tasveer teri bassi,
    sheesha toh tod diya, parr tasveer na chura saki..
    Mila kya tujhe mere iss dil se khelkar,
    jaan hi chahiye thi toh maang kar dekhi hoti... Jabh aankh mein nami si hoti hei,
    Dil mein kisiki kami si hoti hei,
    Jabh aankh jukh jaaye toe nami sukh jaaye,
    Par koi bataaye kaise dil ka dukh jaaye...!
    Be-Aetebaar waqt pe Jhunjla ke ro parey
    Kho ke kabhi ussey tou kabhi Paa ke ro parey
    Kab tak kissi ke soug mein rouein gey umer bhur
    Hum khud ko kitni baar yeh samjha ke ro parey Mujhey Yaqeen tou nahin magar Yahi sach hai
    Mein terey waastey Umrein guzaar sakta hoon
    Yahi nahin ke tujhey jeetney ki khawaahish hai
    Mein terey waastey khud ko bhi haar sakta hoon


    Is kadar hum unki mohabbat mei kho gaye,
    ki ek najar dekha, aur bus unhi ke hum ho gaye,
    Aankh khuli to andhera tha, dekha ek sapna tha,
    Aankh bandh ki aur, unhi sapno mei phir so gaye... Jabh aashman ke sitare, humko dekhte hei,
    Hum kuch anjani soch mei pad jate hei,
    Har lamha hum aisa mehsoos karte hei,
    Ki voh kuch kehte hi, chup ho jate hei..
    Mohabbat ko mahobbat ki tarah paa na sake
    Mohabbat ko ibaadat keh Khudda tujhe maan liya
    Dil sei dil toe kabhi mill na sakei
    Tere kadmo mein dil ko kurbaan kar diya Eei Khudda bahot badda hei jahan tera
    Ish jahan mein he koi nahi bhi mera
    Kehne ko toe tunei bahot kuch diya
    Aur kahe toe kuch bhi nahi hei mera!
    agar terna hai to pani mein aao,
    kinaron pe kya rakha hai
    pyar karna hai to bahon mein aao,
    isharon mein kya rakha hai.
    (From: Jagmeet - new delhi) zindagi to bewafa hai, ek din thukrayegi, maut hi ek sacchi mehbooba hai , ek din zaroor ayegi
    (From: mitesh - nairobi)
    dosti mein dil ka tamasha dekha nahi jata,
    humse tuta hua sisa dekha nahi jata,
    apne hisse ki khusiya bhi de du tujhe,
    aye dost tera utra hua chehra dekha nahi jata
    (From: irfan - hyderabad) Kya kahu tujhe, khwab kahu tou toot jayega, dil kahu tou bikhar jayega aa tera naam zindagi rakh doon maut se pehle tera saath tou na choot payega..!!
    (From: TheManu - Kota, Rajasthan)
    Din Tere Khayaal Mein Guzar Jaata Hai
    Raat Ko Bhi Tera Hi Khayaal Aata Hai
    Kabhi Kabhi Ye Khayaal Is Kadar Badh
    Jaata Hai Ki Aaine Mein Bhi Tere Chehara Nazar Aata Hai
    (From: dev, Jodhpur) Uski Ankhon Ki Deewani Hoon,
    Uski Muskaan Ki Mein Shamma Hoon,
    Har Pal Mujhko Itna Satata Hai,
    Phir Bhi Dil Aur Jaan Se Mein Uski Ashqi Hoon
    (From: dev, Jodhpur)
    Lab Pe Hi Rukti Hai Baat Aate Aate
    Neend To Nahi Aati Sapnay Bohat Hain Aate
    Hum To Hain Phase Ik Haseen Uljhaan Mein
    Kaash Woh Aakar Iseh Suljhaate:::::::::::
    (From: dev, Jodhpur) Manzilein bhi us ki thi
    Rasta bhi us ka tha
    Ek main akela tha
    Kafila bhi us ka tha
    Saath saath chalne ki soch bhi us ki thi
    Phir rasta badalne ka faisla bhi us ka tha
    Aaj kyun akela hoon
    Dil sawal karta hai
    Log to us ke the
    kia khuda bhi us ka tha
    (From: dev, Jodhpur)

    Hume tumse Love hai
    please refuse na karna..
    Ye zero watt ka hope bulb hai
    please ise fuse na karna!!!
    (From: dev, Jodhpur) Chand Se Pyari Chandini,
    Chandini Se Pyari Raat,
    Raat Se Pyari Zindagee,
    Zindagee Se Pyare Aap........
    (From: dev, Jodhpur)
    pal pal jeete the jis pal ke liye,
    aaj wo pal bhi mila to ek pal ke liye,
    kyun na jiye is pal ko har pal ke liye
    ham tumhare liye tum hamare liye
    (From: avin setia - jaitsar) Aapko Lagta Hai Ke Hume Aapko Bhula Rakha Hai
    Aap Nahi Jaante Dil Mein Kahi Chupa Rakha Hai
    Dekh Na Le In Aankhon Me Aapko Koi
    Isliye Palko Ko Bhi Chupa Rakha Hai::::
    (From: dev, Jodhpur)
    Tute hue pemane mein jaam nahi aata
    dil ke mareej ko aaram nahi aata
    ay haseeno dil todne se pehle sou baar socho
    kyonki toota hua dil kisi ke kaam nahi aata
    (From: vipul - india) Suni zindagi mein halchal si mehsoos hui, bejaan dil ki aaj dhadkan mehsus hui,
    Jane aaj kyu aisa laga, shayad aapki kami mehsoos hui
    (From: dev - jodhpur)
    Nazar jhuki to paimane bane,
    Dil toote to maikhane bane,
    kuch na kuch to zaroor hai aap mein,
    yunhi nahi hum aapke dewaane bane!!!
    (From: Ashu - Delhi) Sapno se dil lagane ki adat nahi rahi, har waqt muskurane ki adat nahi rahi. Yeh sochke ki koi manane nehi ayegi, ab humse ruth jane ki adat nahi rahi.
    (From: Prosenjit - Kolkata)
    Yar ne dil ka haal batana chod diya,
    Humne bhi gehrai mein jaana chod diya,
    Jab usko hi doori ka ehsaas nahi,
    Humne bhi ehsaas dilaana chod diya.
    (From: Vivek Manchanda - Lucknow) Log kehte hai hume adat hai muskurane ki, par wo kya jane ke yeh bhi ek adat hai Gham chupane ki!!!
    (From: Seher - )
    Mast Hariyali, Dubte Suraj ki lali,
    kuch maja nahi ata, jab pas me na ho tum...
    (From: Manoj, Jalgaon) Chandi raat me barsat buri lagti hai,
    ghar me ho lash to Barat buri lagti hai,
    Khushi me mere dost kuch bhi kah dal,
    gam me to har bat buri lagti hai.
    (From: Manoj, Jalgaon)
    Dard Kaafi hai bekhudi K liye,
    Maut Zaruri hai Zindagi K liye,
    Kaun marta hai Kisi K Liye,
    Hum to Zinda hai sirf aap ki Dosti K liye...
    (From: Aryan74) Suna he pyar karne wale ajib hote hai,
    khushi ke badle gam nasib hote hai,
    mere dost mohabbat naa karna kabhi,
    kyun ke pyaar karne wale bade badnaseeb hote hai...
    (From: Jeetu, Jalgaon)
    Pyaar karne walo ki kismat buri hoti hai,
    har mulakat judai ki ghadi hoti hai,
    waqt mile to rishte ki kitab padh lena,
    DOSTI har rishtey se badi hoti hai..
    (From: Dhiraj, Ladnun) Hichikyon se ek baat ka ehsaas hota hai ki
    Shayaad koi hume yaad karta hai,
    milne na aaye to kya
    hum per kuch lamhe to barbad to karta hai...
    (From: Nikhil, Ahmedabad)
    Har Kadam saath hai, Tu hi mera parichay hai, Tu saans banke mare dhadkan mae rehta hai, Tu dard ban ke mare aansuon mae behta hai.
    (From: Aashish - Delhi) zameen badle, zamana badle, zamane ki hawa badle, Gar main tum se badloon to mujhse mera khuda badle
    (From: Pratima - Jaipur)
    kisine dil ko es kadar chu liya hai,ki hum kisi aur ko chu na sakey,hum to chaley thay dost banane par aap dhadkan ban gaye.
    (From: Rekha - chandigarh) chand ko garoor hain, kyonki chandni oska noor hain, hum kis par garoor kare, hamara to chand hee bhout door hain.
    (From: raj - patiala)
    Woh Dil Hi Kya Jo Milne Ki Dua Na Kare, Tujhe Bhoolkar Jiyuun Khuda Na Kare, Rahaingi Teri Yaadain Meri Zindagi Bankar, Yeh Aur Baat Hai Ki Zindagi Wafa Na Kare..!!
    (From: mahendra - mumbai) Woh Dil Hi Kya Jo Milne Ki Dua Na Kare, Tujhe Bhoolkar Jiyuun Khuda Na Kare, Rahaingi Teri Yaadain Meri Zindagi Bankar, Yeh Aur Baat Hai Ki Zindagi Wafa Na Kare..!!
    (From: VISHAL - AGRA)
    nigahe aapki pehchan hain hamari,muskurarat aapki shaan hai hamari,rakhna hifazat se kyunki saasay aapki jaan hai hamari.
    (From: shaan - india) marne ke baad bhi sata raha hai koi..merikabar se mitti hata raha hai koi.. Aye khuda do pal ki zindagi aur de de..meri kabbar se udaas ja raha hai koi.
    (From: javed - pune)
    Aankhon ki zuban woh samajh nahi paate,Honth magar kuch keh nahi paate,Apni bebsi kis tarah kahe,Koi hai jiske bina hum rah nahi paate.........
    (From: Vivek Manchanda - Lucknow) A kash Shayeri hum bhi likh paate,Lafzon ke khel hum bhi khel paate.Khuda ne dil par chot kuch aisi di,Aansuon ko chupaake Kash Hum bhi Muskara Paate.............
    (From: Vivek Manchanda - Lucknow)
    Yeh mat sochna ki bhul jayenge tumhey,dur rehkar bhi chahenge tumhey.Agar dost banker raas na aye to ajnabi bankar bhi yaad ayenge tumhey......
    (From: smruti) Raate Gumnam Hoti Hai......... Din Kisike Naam hota hai
    Hum Jindgi kuch is Tarah Jite hai.....ki hAr LaMhA Sirf DosTO Ke hIIII nAAAAm HotA HaI
    (From: Mayur - Nanded)
    (From: Vivek Manchanda, Lucknow)
    Mana teri nazar mein tera pyaar hum nahi,
    kaise kahen ki tere talabgaar hum nahi,
    Khud ko jala ke khak kar dala, mita diya,
    lo ab tumhari raah mein dewaar hum nahi,
    Jis ko sanwara humne tamannaon ke khoon se,
    gulshan mein us bahar ke haqdaar hum nahi,
    Dhokha diya hai khud ko muhobbat ke naam se,
    kaise kahen ki tere gunahgaar hum nahi..... -
    Bhoolne waale se koyi keh de zara
    is tarah yaad aane se kya faaida,
    Jab mere dil ki duniya basaati nahin
    phir khayaalon mein aane se kya faaida
    Kya kahoon aapse kitni umeeden thi
    Aap kya badle duniya badal si gayi,
    Aasra de ke dil tod te hain mera
    Is tarah sataane se kya faaida, Chaar tinke jala ke kya mil gaya
    Mit sakana zamane se mera nishaan,
    Mujhpe bijli girao to jaanu sahi
    Aashiaan par girane se kya faaida
     
  8. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    I CANNOT GIVE YOU THE FORMULA FOR SUCCESS, BUT I CAN GIVE YOU THE FORMULA FOR FAILURE--WHICH IS :: " PLEASE EVERYone " !!

    thts sumbdys signature.

    the othr poem u wrote.. is tht also a copy ? lolz.. was goin 2 giv u reps 4 the poem.
     
  9. atthanii

    atthanii Theif Slayer

    hell..all of em are copy and i have provided sources too with the...and why isn't he replying back?...hmmmm...
     
  10. jayswami

    jayswami Blue J

    i now believe. this raj aryan dude is stealing :p:

    hey raj aryan why man why? this is not a forum to show off.. but to learn and teach.
    if u post someone elses post, always mention the source.
     
  11. skaw

    skaw snooze

    and i thought raj aryan was a great writer .. chi chi .. disgusting .. i even think i gave you rep for ur other poems .. dont tell me they were stolen as well ..
    why do you want to show that u can write real good? i know i can't so i don't .. :confused: well, don't steal ..
     
  12. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    Hi All,
    Dunno wats gng on here in this thread... but I m a new chap in here (n jus some 8 months I started playing guitar)... jus got in to put my works.. but do agree.. the chords r older n the same.. jus few modifications.. Strumming is 2 down 2 up (thts the way i did..)
    please let me know if i m wrong..

    G#m F#
    Wo lumhey Wo Baatein koi na Jane
    F#(continue..) E
    thi kaisey raatein... wohhhh barsatein
    G#m F#
    wo bheegie bheegie yadein
    F# E
    wo bheegie bheegie yadein

    G#m F#
    Na main Jaanu Na tu Jaane
    G#m
    kaisa hai yea mausam
    F#
    koi na jaane
    G#m
    kahin se yeh fiza aayee
    F#
    gamo ke rut sung laayee
    E
    gafa ho gaye hum
    F#
    juda ho gaye hum..

    regards
    Sach...
     
  13. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    oops.. y it didnt took spaces... between G#m and F#.. those were the only changes (the way i played)..
     
  14. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    guys .. really sorry again... i replied on the wrong thread...
    this is like a maze...

    apologies again... play gud tunes..
     
  15. sisu

    sisu New Member

    WELL i got one for you people...i have been writin poems from last 3 years or so... this one of my favourite... just check it n let me know guys..if u like it... n if some1 feels tht i have copied or took from somewher...then its upto u to feel ..i know i have written this n in wt condition i wrote this..here it goes..
    I CANT IMAGINE MY PAST WITHOUT U,
    MY PRESENT IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT U,
    n I DONT HAVE ANY FUTURE WITHOUT U,
    well ITS past,present or future,
    I JUST CANT IMAGINE MY LIFE WITHout U.
     
  16. munna

    munna Munna <img src="http://www.indianguitartabs.com/im

    aye hata sawan ke ghata...chal fut le AAA battery...
     
  17. crimson_remains

    crimson_remains New Member

    nice write sisu
     
  18. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh


    good effort bacheee nice work .....always respect ur creation .....give a title ..and never bother how others will take it just frm ur side it shud be pure....post more.i am waiting :beer:
     
  19. *+*neel_pori*+*

    *+*neel_pori*+* Double Poster

    Was That A Signature?
     
  20. *+*neel_pori*+*

    *+*neel_pori*+* Double Poster

    Good Work Keep It Up
     

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