Betrayal

Betrayed

Unimaginably selfish thoughts
Of depths unseen
But now, shattered to the core
Alone, you weep

"Be a man!", you said
And walked away
Aren't you the scared one though?
Too terrified to even pray?

The flawlessly beautiful dream
Your life seemed to be
Was all just an illusion
The truth I failed to see

The fury you unleashed
I can barely control
Betrayal at it's worst and you still,
Ask me to forgive your soul?

Did something go terribly wrong
Or had I just failed to realise
That you were never an angel
Never sweet, never wise

Someday, I might forgive
But, forget I never will
The scars will always remind me
How your own friend, you tried to kill

:shock: Dunno why i wrote this... :shock:

 

closed by mistake :shock:

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now open

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:shock: Donno why i read this... :shock:

 

it wasnt worth reading, huh... :

 

nice @ cryptic, really nice

 

good one!!
F.L

 

@har1s, ansh

thnx guys

 

@trish this is so nice.....reps for u

 

have to spread some

 

Nice one...... (cant give reps, they've been given before; cant say that you are a really good poet, i've said that before)

 

ok.. after these replies, i have come to the conclusion that

1) this poem is nice

2) u ppl should get to spreading reps :grin:

:Tongue2: thnx!!

 

i agree with your conclusions ..
this poem is really nice ..
and i do need to spread some more rep... hehe ..

 

Oh God Cryptic .. can't u see my ID ?? it's notty_lad .. was juz kiddin .. hehe .. it's high time u start to "GET" muh comments
Good one
nJOY..

 

@shahrukh

thnx



@notty_lad

ok.. now i know what to expect frm u whenevr i post a poem... :grin:

thnx

 

dodo,y had u closed it in the first place yesterday..........its awesome and the words r amazzin......i think u write the best poems on IGT...........keep them comin...

 

achha hai!!! carry on, i wont be that active here anymore. glad to read ur poem.

 

kisne tujhe dhokha diya
???

:think:

nice one though reps if it permits.......... or else sorry

 

@abhi

that was by mistake : thnx for informing me else i might have not noticed at all!

and m not the best here dude.. but thnx


@Shanky

whaat! i was hoping u'd become MORE active!!! anyways, thnx



@spy

no one betrayed me that's y i was wondering y i wrote this... glad u liked it

 

u got my pm kya....my pc went off wen i hit submit..i thought u din get...and u r the best ..............

 

^^^ya i got it... thnx a million