Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by CrYpTiC_angel, Nov 30, 2005.

  1. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    Unimaginably selfish thoughts
    Of depths unseen
    But now, shattered to the core
    Alone, you weep

    "Be a man!", you said
    And walked away
    Aren't you the scared one though?
    Too terrified to even pray?

    The flawlessly beautiful dream
    Your life seemed to be
    Was all just an illusion
    The truth I failed to see

    The fury you unleashed
    I can barely control
    Betrayal at it's worst and you still,
    Ask me to forgive your soul?

    Did something go terribly wrong
    Or had I just failed to realise
    That you were never an angel
    Never sweet, never wise

    Someday, I might forgive
    But, forget I never will
    The scars will always remind me
    How your own friend, you tried to kill

    :shock: Dunno why i wrote this... :shock:
    .:SpY_GaMe:. likes this.
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    :oops: closed by mistake :shock:


    now open

  3. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    :shock: Donno why i read this... :shock:
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    it wasnt worth reading, huh... :eek::
  5. har1s

    har1s <b>Untitled</b>

    nice @ cryptic, really nice :)
  6. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    good one!!
  7. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    @har1s, ansh

    thnx guys :)
  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @trish this is so nice.....reps for u
  9. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    have to spread some :mad:
  10. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs &amp; Pasta

    Nice one...... (cant give reps, they've been given before; cant say that you are a really good poet, i've said that before)
  11. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ok.. after these replies, i have come to the conclusion that

    1) this poem is nice :)

    2) u ppl should get to spreading reps :mad: :grin:

    :Tongue2: thnx!!
  12. shak

    shak Harrr!

    i agree with your conclusions ..
    this poem is really nice ..
    and i do need to spread some more rep... hehe ..
  13. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Oh God Cryptic .. can't u see my ID ?? it's notty_lad .. was juz kiddin .. hehe .. it's high time u start to "GET" muh comments ;)
    Good one
  14. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    thnx :)


    ok.. now i know what to expect frm u whenevr i post a poem... :grin:

  15. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    dodo,y had u closed it in the first place yesterday..........its awesome and the words r amazzin......i think u write the best poems on IGT...........keep them comin...
  16. shanky666_

    shanky666_ New Member

    achha hai!!! carry on, i wont be that active here anymore. glad to read ur poem.
  17. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    kisne tujhe dhokha diya


    nice one though reps if it permits.......... or else sorry ;)
  18. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    that was by mistake :eek:: thnx for informing me else i might have not noticed at all!

    and m not the best here dude.. but thnx :)


    whaat! i was hoping u'd become MORE active!!! anyways, thnx :)


    no one betrayed me that's y i was wondering y i wrote this... glad u liked it
  19. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    u got my pm pc went off wen i hit submit..i thought u din get...and u r the best ..............
  20. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^^^ya i got it... thnx a million :)

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