another poem by me... hope u guys like it and like always looking forward to ur comments and suggestions! here goes... BE THERE! With every step I make I fear for the risk I take Cause I don’t want to regret Even if I make a mistake I just want u to be there, to support me Through the times, which are thick or thin I just don’t wanna look back Once I have achieved my goals That is what is to be kept in mind Once I have reached where I should stand I just hope u stay by my side And help me believe in whatever I decide That would help me through out my life Once I have u on my side! thanks for reading ppl! comments........
"And help me believe in whatever I decide That would help me through out my life" hmmmmm difficult to know wat exactly u want.....kiddin way to go.
@ hardik... thanks man! @ knights_diwani... well i really haven't ritten this for someone in particular... and yea... just a lil secret for EVERYONE: no one gets to read my stuff except for ppl on IGT... ppl hardly know that i rite...: @ walk_alone... thanks for reading man! :rock: @ madhuresh... thanks... well i didn't keep this id or watever... a friend of mine on these forums changed it... and now i actually like it! @ nimitr... thanks a lot! just keep commenting on my poems the way u do... and i'll keep riting! :nw:
quite contradictory.. dont u think so? If u know u wont have any regrets for your decisions be it good or bad.. then why the fear for the risk involved?? Shouldnt you be happy with watever the outcome be? :think: You dont wanna look back once u ve achieved wat you wanted to !!.... Seems too egoistic to me.. I might just be wrong ... what do u say? Good attempt !! No offence meant
@ kinght_ki_gf... thanks a lot for ur thoughts.... means a lot.... well i rote wat i felt i guess someone else should agree or disagree wid u... hehe @ zoom... thanks!
^@ knight_ki_gf..... i am sooooo srry! just corrected it.... : its actuallly confusing... TOO MANY KNIGHT PPL ON THESE FORUMS now! :
