Be There!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Feb 22, 2006.

  1. #iR@


    another poem by me... hope u guys like it and like always looking forward to ur comments and suggestions! here goes...

     BE THERE!

    With every step I make
    I fear for the risk I take
    Cause I don’t want to regret
    Even if I make a mistake

    I just want u to be there,
    to support me
    Through the times,
    which are thick or thin

    I just don’t wanna look back
    Once I have achieved my goals
    That is what is to be kept in mind
    Once I have reached where I should stand

    I just hope u stay by my side
    And help me believe in whatever I decide
    That would help me through out my life
    Once I have u on my side!

    thanks for reading ppl! comments........:cool:
  2. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    simple n sweet...keep writing!!
  3. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    Sweet it is...:)Im sure he/she will b by urside after reading this!
  4. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    "And help me believe in whatever I decide
    That would help me through out my life"

    hmmmmm difficult to know wat exactly u want.....kiddin

    way to go.
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    good ..... gandi bacchi ...hey whts the reson behind this name...waht gandi things u do ??
  6. nimitr

    nimitr New Member

    Suits me ..... nice work ..... #iR@ .... :)
  7. #iR@


    @ hardik... thanks man! :)

    @ knights_diwani... well i really haven't ritten this for someone in particular... and yea... just a lil secret for EVERYONE: no one gets to read my stuff except for ppl on IGT... ppl hardly know that i rite...:eek::

    @ walk_alone... thanks for reading man! :rock:

    @ madhuresh... thanks... well i didn't keep this id or watever... a friend of mine on these forums changed it... and now i actually like it! ;)

    @ nimitr... thanks a lot! just keep commenting on my poems the way u do... and i'll keep riting! :nw:
  8. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    quite contradictory.. dont u think so? If u know u wont have any regrets for your decisions be it good or bad.. then why the fear for the risk involved?? Shouldnt you be happy with watever the outcome be? :think:

    You dont wanna look back once u ve achieved wat you wanted to !!.... Seems too egoistic to me.. I might just be wrong ... what do u say?

    Good attempt !!
    No offence meant :)
  9. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Gud one...
    Keep it up..

  10. #iR@


    @ kinght_ki_gf... thanks a lot for ur thoughts:).... means a lot.... well i rote wat i felt i guess someone else should agree or disagree wid u... hehe

    @ zoom... thanks! :)
  11. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    *ahem ahem... u need to write knight_ki_gf... not knight_ki_deewani :eek::
  12. #iR@


    ^@ knight_ki_gf..... i am sooooo srry! just corrected it.... :eek:: its actuallly confusing... TOO MANY KNIGHT PPL ON THESE FORUMS now! :p:
  13. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    its ok :)
    I guess every gal is looking for her knight in shining armour !!

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