haan yaar, aayi saala ye to thik thaak dikhti hai.....ruk amin chotichoti lines main add karta hoon.....teri poem acchi hai maine do baar padhi...lekin koi comment karne ka jii nahi kiya so nahi kiyaa...but app ke ghar main balcony jaroor ho gi..hai na?
Phir se ek bharia comment..... he hee.... Balcony to hai par balcony pe baithne ka time nahi milta..... Tumahare jaisa time nahi hai yaar....... Aaur rahi baat poem ka..... poem ko maro goli.....
^^^Koi baat nai Madhuresh ko ek question ke do answer mil gai....ek ke saath ek free ....he he... challo ab u guys carry on...m going....time to go home
maine tukka mara tha ..... mera ek friend ka chota bhai rooz kahta ki kaaal barish huiii ....maine kaha kahaan yaar...phir friend ne bata ya vo raat ko toilet first foor pe bani baalcony se karta tha...choothe bhai ka kamara neeche tah....main ye nahi keh raha...i mean bas cheejhen yaad aa jati hain haha
barish pe ek acche shayar ne kaha tha Abb ki saavan main jaane kyaa baat huii mera ghar chood ke sare saher main barsaat huii
Garima Ji...! Aap ne jo kalpanik chitra dikhaaya hai apne iss kavita main, hum ko bahout pasand aaya...! Aap ke behtareen kalaamon main se ek hai ye...! Younhi likhte rahiyega...! Amanush...
this is not the first time m reading this compliment (I wud like to tk it as a compliment...)...so i thnk its high time now...i shud start considering Bollywood as an option now...for song writing :grin: :grin: Thanks Nimisha
