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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by notty_lad, Dec 1, 2005.

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  1. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Thanks Notty..
    i was actually speechless and i think you know the reason why :)
    dont mind what Cryptic said..i feel it wasnt intentional to hurt your feelings..
    poets have what they say "poetic freedom"
    there isnt any particular pattern that has to be followed
    and when the words start flowing and the mind starts racing
    rhyme or no rhyme ... it doesnt matter
    the theme of the poem should be clear
    and the message should clearly get across..

    Have you read "Ek Shayar" by me??
    i guess more or less i have described a poet in that :)

    Please PLease please.....Please dont stop posting poems
    its a request..
    hoping you'll continue

    Thanks again dude..
     
  2. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening


    I thought it was quite boring really. Perhaps I'd find it a bit more interesting if it were dedicated to me instead :)

    The minute I read your first lines, I knew what word you were going to rhyme with. You fell into a very predictable pattern and predictability is the poets cancer.


    Oh but I probably shouldn't say all this since I am a forum leader.


    One word of advice: If you don't want people to comment on what you've said, feel free to use the PM function. Use the public forum and risk some people saying "unkind" things to you (I'm still hunting for what was discouraging about what she said though).
     
  3. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    No comments!! .. i find it useless to explain u all da order of events .. nor do i care now .. n yeah .. u said too little dude .. go ahead n degrade da poem to itz full extent now .. :p: .. i care "LEAST" bout people like u ;) . . see ya around ..
     
  4. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    OH !!! wat was that sorry for.. :think: i opened the thread and found a sorry.. it seems u r trying to DECEMBER fool me like april fool ( i know that was a PJ)

    well.. well.. well...

    most of the ppl posting here females.. ofcourse i can exclude shaks.. (as garima says).. thinking wat can be the reason :think:

    oh it seems there was a poem posted there in place of sorry.. :eek::

    but ...


    OMG wat are Poem Principles.. ??? *puzzled* anyway.. good job as a forum lead..



    oye NOTTY.. Dil Pe mat le yaar... have a chilled :beer: ... i never thought it will be so easy to piss u off.. keep writing.. because a man is a man who never quits..

    koi kahe kahta rahe jitna bhi hamko deewana..
    hum logon ki thokar mein hai ye zamana...



    vishwa :cool:
     
  5. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    U make me laugh dude ;) .. hehe .. well actually poems are too personal dude .. n forget all this poem mess .. juz forget it let's have a :beer: together :) cheerS!!!
    n end all arguments .. right away !

    hey .. i'l try ur look :cool: .. how do i look ?? hehe
     
  6. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    u look .. kool... cheers :beer:
     
  7. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    yo buddy .. :cool: .. cheers!!!!!!!
     
  8. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening


    I have better things to do with my time than to "degrade" your poem. If I don't like a poem, I refuse to say things like "Nice" or "Wonderful Job" or something similar. If you want me to stroke your ego and tell you what a wonderful writer you are even if I feel that you are not, please mention it clearly in the first post of your threads.
     
  9. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned


    its better is if i don't comment here :think: wat do u say Mr. B.J Roy
     
  10. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening


    No, feel free to say what you want to. I don't grudge opinions against me.
     
  11. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    i only quoted the words "disrespect to poetic principles" coz those were frm notty's original words, which i had felt were aimed at me. he could have simply replied to my comment (which was not on his poem but that phrase he used) instead of throwin a tantrum. i've had enough of him bein a hypocrite tellin me "it's ok, i have nothing against u" while he holds up all these grudges.

    this is my last post in this thread. thanks.
     
  12. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned


    Oh O.. I see...

    anyway i m also out of the thread.. don't want to come between u two...


    But i will say..

    PEACE IS THE WAY TO GOD
     
  13. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Hey cryptic .. ur gettin me wrong buddy .. i said sincerely .. i really don't have any grudges .. n v're completely fine .. i stand by muh word .. its juz dat i've decided not to post a poem henceforth .. these are two different things .. of course we're fine :)
     
  14. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    lol .. if u have better things to do buddy .. then y did u even bother to reply to muh post haha .. take a break dude .. n don't reply .. n do ur "BETTER THINGS" .. coz it hardly matterz to me .. ;)
     
  15. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    @notty..
    saare thread ke maza kirkira kar diya yaar... :eek::

    acchi khaasi poem ke baad faaltu ki daleelain....
     
  16. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    hey .. man .. seriously i don't wanna have a bad relation wid guys on IGT .. coz i have a lotta respect for all of u .. n i specially don't wan a bad relationship wid u ansh .. coz i've seen u around here a lot .. n believe me .. i guess no one understands me .. anyway .. have ur say guys .. shoot me wid ur wordz ..
     
  17. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    its not abt having a bad relationship..
    its abt the atmosphere now in this thread is kinda dull....
     
  18. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    i guess its better to close this thread .. everythin went wrong n haywire.. MODS plz plz .. close it ..
     
  19. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Thread closed on notty's request
     
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