are you their..!?!?!?

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Jul 7, 2010.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    people say you do exist
    people say u do..
    but please tell me how do i believe them when so many times
    my heart and my very soul has been slit through...

    i know that i am not normally rude
    but this time i really can't help myself
    really want to burst out once and for all
    and finish of this fued...

    i hate you for makin' me the way i am
    i hate you for every damn thing in my life
    i am so sick of everything that sometimes
    i just feel like pickin' up that god damned knife...

    well damn you..damn you...
    listen to every rude word
    from my mouth
    listen to as much as you can listen to...

    for all i want you to know is that I HATE yOU..!!
  2. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    oh my God... Why so much hatred...? Chill out young lady..
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    can't...!!! i hate ur god...!!!! i h8 everybody's god...!! i srsly do... sorry for soundin' soo rude...
  4. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    You're sounding like a loser tonite.. only losers curse God.. don't be one..
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    I disagree. For two reasons:
    No one makes you, you make yourself, only a few get a headstart, n others start at or somwhere close to the line.
    Also, the wah you are, always gotta be good. Very few ppl say i'm bad, and if you do so, u need to look again. People are good/bad depending on the circumstances..

    Oh, and I liked the poem, not verbally different from ur others, but arranged well...keep it up!
  6. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    we can't exactly say tht, though u're partly right..some ppl hate god for some reason. And everyone's got their opinions on it. :D
    Mine is, if you dont believe in god, dun hate him, or start believing, in full faith.
  7. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    I wouldn't comment on lyrics since its just an "outburst".

    Iam an Atheist, but that doesnt give me any reason to believe, like, hate something that doesn't exist for me.

    We create our own Gods. Sometimes its a person you love, sometimes a person you work for, anyone and everyone is part of that entity we call GOD, 'coz we are dependent on them for our happyness and security.

    its a passing feeling and will subside soon. Rather than looking at people who make you unhappy, look at the people who make you happy and who are happy 'coz of you. Stop being SELFISH.
  8. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    I'm happy that this time you arranged the poem in neat stanzas...and there r no short-forms....this way it's looking very neat and easy to read too :) it wud be gud if u ll continue writing in this form
    well the poem is too pessimistic and emo kind...n i cud make out hw u were feeling while writing this poem...usually ppl write lyk this when the emotions just overflow for god...oh i hv got no more philosophical things to tell...u hv already got so many suggestions :D :D
  9. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    well all i wanna say is k poetry is not poetry witout emotns...nd outbursts r emotns...nd dey r d best time to pen down...accordin' to me...
    nd i am not a loser...i am not a pessimistic..nor an emo...only a frustated li'l grl hu had many probs in her dat pt in her life...nd well she had to blame god 4 it....nd its just my opinion cnt help it...i am kinda athiest...or probably am turnin' into 1...
  10. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    i need to ask all ov u one thng ...after dis poem....

    hw many of u hav started hatin' me...or will probably do so in future?????.....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz rply...everybody...i need to knw dis....
  11. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    you are right!!! you are a frustrated little girl and you will GROW UP.

    HATE is too strong a word for you right now.

    There is a world to live once you go older.

  12. ur peom was gud .. i liked it ...
    ^^ ..... kiddo ur not turning to an atheisht or non beliver in gods power to helpu live better ...its actually the opposite just have a look at ur poems they keep on getting stronger and stronger an arument between u and the gods...
    haha ...let me tell u how u cna become a really non belvier in god ...its when u never even think that the vegegative process of our degradtion is governed by any ...or its just the faster expansion of universe after the big bang that makes spaces for growth and decay....hmmm...and then u write things like
    I did i knew i could have done ..i changed the movie of my life back and forth...

    anyways ur poem is gud..keep posting
  13. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    hmm.....rite...thnk u ... i hope d same...
  14. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member it...!! thnx a ton.. \m/
  15. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    No...why should we hate you? Any particular reason?
  16. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    mmm....i mean...not as like if u guys feel like i am a loser....a pessimist....or wateva....u dun' realy like dese kinds of u..??
  17. i love loosers dhuskis, sulfis and charsis...

    I live near a drugged mind and sleeping soule...

    I like to listen to the thoughts of a woundring mind..

    If ur a looser stupid idiot fool dummbo I will love to give u company ..:)
  18. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thnk u soooo much...!!! \m/\m/\M/.. :)

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