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So I did come up with a poem ...finally...so ok basically its kinda unorganized but since its related to my thinking process it feels more natural this way..I just let it flow..but I've missed question marks at places..plz understand..theme is, well, pretty common..but still..here goes...


1 million questions
running through my head
everytime I get up
from the wrong side of the bed
Is it the day that follows the night
or is it the other way around
Does everything have to get lost
So that it can be found
Does every sorrow make a tear
Does the worst always happen
to what we hold dear
Does love add a smile
or just gives a broken heart
Am I running slowly in life
Or am I still at the start
How much time do I have left??
Is it a lot??
Or am I about to end a battle
I never really fought??
Am I moving
Or am I at a standstill
And its the world that moves on??
Am I in a prison
Where I built the walls
If there is freedom beyond this prison
Why do I feel guilty of treason??
Does every road I take must always be wrong??
Or should I find some silver lining in the uncertainty
and have faith in serendipity
Does love always hurt??
Or should I be insane
and try to find pleasure in the pain?
So at the end of the day
I lie on the bed,trying to sleep
but still unsure
If I sleep to get up
Or wake up to sleep....


Comments are welcome...or wanted actually..
:dance:

 

I loved it up to the 'love hurts' part, that was completely unneccessary IMO. And u know I complain about stuff like that, coz I've done that before with you

I'm glad you didn't put '?' everywhere, that would have been annoying.

I like the questions that u asked

 

hmm..yes but y'know I did want to put 'love' in there coz it was one of my questions..but instead of explaining how it hurts (in some cases) I just generalized that love hurts...yeah other than that I know you're bored of the "broken heart laments"..
btw you mean the complain part or love part??
Question marks..yeah thank you..thats what I thought...

And thank you again...
I mean when I saw your reply I read 'unnecesarry','complain' and 'annoying' at first glance..must say I was scared..

Edited the 'love' part a bit....

 

It's awesome now, really

 

thanks a lot,really

 

awesome as alwayz mate....i wish i could wrrite like u :d

 

thanks a lot man...but I'm hoping you didnt mean to say "" :..hahaha..no man..you go ahead and be better than me.....

 

hmmmmmmm.... ahem ahem... hmmmmm.... *walks around*

and someone said they werent in the XACT mood to rite :

how do u come up wid such good poems everytime? SERIOUSLY? i mean ur poems r getting better and better or rather great and greater everytimg u rite! BUT one issue.... love part... dont think its XACTLY fitting rite... otherwise.... :nw:


and yea NOW after reading a good poem i feel like... :dance: (i know it made no sense hehe)

 

lol...sorry???lol....yeah it just so happened that I got all poetic today..
awwww....thank you soooooooo much..I try..
hmmm...love part..thank god you didn't read the unedited one then!!lol..see love actually baffles me..so that's why its in the poem..otherwise it has no relation with the rest of the poem...but there was no way I could blend it with the rest so it kinda stands out..
heheh..no sense is fine when talking with me
So let me join you in :dance:
keep replying..thanks a lot

 

Dude.. i feel its ur best poem.. its simple and the best part is i can relate myself with this.. reps coming ur way.. i feel i think egzactly the same way u think.. thats why liked it alot.. love u for this..

 

Thanks man...yeah it is pretty simple..I like it that way....hmmm..really??good man...no wonder you liked it then...
Thanks again

 

oh n btw i forgot to add in ma last post that this poem cud make a GREAT SONG! think about it...

 

hmmmmm...yeahh...it has potential I mean..nice..thank you ..

 

I forgot to say.. it should be "One million questions" in the 1st line

 

raat ko kehne laga mujh se gagan ka chaand
aadami bhi kyaa anokhi cheej hota hai...
uljhane apni bana kar app hi phansta hai
aur phir be chain ho jagata na soota ahi..........ramdhari shing dinkar (vah vah)

app ki poem mast thi
bass swam main vyaast thi
app aur acche rachan kaar jaroor ban jayege
gar swayam ko dusaroon se jood kar dikhlayenge ......madhuresh ( lol)

good poem dude

 

but its already questions:
its not nice to lie:

lol..okk..well thanks

 

doosro ke liye jeekar dekha humne
ab khud ki soch mein vyast hain
rachankaar bane na bane
kum se kum kha pi ke toh mast hai........(lol)

lol..thanks man..

 

this style of writng is called stream of conciousness....so actuaaly iss ka ye disadvantage hota hia ki app charater ki sooch main itna deeply jate ho ki u actually for get to relate it to other reader...vahi kehna chaah rah tha main ...hope u got it ...good poem though !

 

Well I literally meant to say that I've really written a lot of poems but never a stream of consciousness...and well the topic demands isolation from the world because he's seeking answers for questions that baffle him..thanks man..

 

the creator is always right cause he is the one who created