Agar aisa hota

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Mar 13, 2007.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    farz karo ki aisa hota
    khuda bhi zamane jaisa hota
    kismatain bikti bazaroon main
    vaqut ka paiman paisa hota....

    baant gaye hote kushboon ke sang
    badaloon ke tukade, havaoon-ki-umang
    nadiyaan kuch kaas jaghoon par rehti
    phoolon ke pass hote bus kuch selected raang
    titliyaan kaanch ke gilasoon main rehti
    rooshani khamoosh seedhi sadkoon pe behti
    na koi jaata kisi ko chood ke itni duur
    yaadain kabhi na kisi ko aakhiri ruksad kehtin
    shoor hota to bas kuch hi kadam chal pata
    sab ke kehne se sab apni jageh ruk jata
    thoda pay kanrne se toota khaab phir se jud jate
    loog gujree lamhoon main ja ke reh paate
    kitna mumkin hota na sab kuch
    har cheej ka daam bas lagte paise kuch...

    ye sooch vahin se aayi hai jahan sabr hum se kehta hai
    hum yaha rehtain hain rakhne vala kahan rehta hai...!!
     
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  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    if no respose for one more day ill leave this forum for ever ...lol
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    bye ..lol ..!
     
  4. loyal

    loyal New Member

    Bahut Khoob !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    thoda hinglish laga !!
    would appreciate if u would substitute selected and pay with its hindi equivalent.
    In all a good composition.
     
  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    accha likha hai!
    par yaar ye english words kyu beech me laate ho...?? write in hindi only!!
     

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