Well I finally tried strumming and singing separately..so the recording is a bit better than last time.But I get a bit off timing at places,will try to get better at that..so here it is : https://www.soundclick.com/bands/pageartist.cfm?bandID=734322 Please do comment
Once again man, never heard this song, but it doesn't sound bad. So if comparing this song with your previous songs then you'll have to agree, when singing and playing seperately you can give yourself while singing some more and more and both will be done better, the guitaring and the vocals, just because you are not so stressed when playing and singing at the same time. Overall, nicely done man, keep going!!!
You haven't heard this song??okk..again,if you can,you must hear the original.. I do agree...singing and strumming separately is a lot less stressful and that way I can develop both of them but I do miss the timing and somehow the vocals don't seem to fit in...which I'll probably need to work on.. Thanks though..really appreciate your comments.
i've heard the original and have played it too at a function....... ur tempo is dead slow.. it should be much much faster.... it sounds like u were singin in bed...... but anyways you have a good voice..... just need to develop.......
Let me start off by saying I really appreciate the honesty.. About the tempo,that was on purpose.I like to come up with my own version (?) of the song..I mean I'm not trying to create a replica of the original but make it different...but I didn't know it sounded bad. Oh,thank you.Well I am trying to develop it..that's why I'm taking long gaps between recordings..only when I feel I gotten better is when I post something here.. Again,thanks a lot.Looking forward to your comments.