Ab roko na

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by horsesmouth, Aug 6, 2012.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    I wrote this song a long time back, and recorded it with my friends, dunno why I never posted it. So here it is, quite simple.

    Ab roko na

    Teri yaadon se nikalne ki bas tamanna thi
    kore kagaz pe likhi wo tarkib mil gayi
    guzre lamho ko fir jeene se kya fayda
    Teri khushboo mein teri hi tasveer mil gayi

    Na roko mujhe,
    ab jane do.
    Meri ankhon se dhool,
    mitane do..
    Na roko mujhe,
    ...ke teri aas,
    mein guzri baaton,
    Se badhti hai pyaas.
    Na roko mujhe
    ab jaane do.
    Meri zameen,
    basane do.

    Ab aaye to fir laut aunga mai,
    Tujhko baahon mein yoon basa lunga mai.
    Fir chhute na kabhi pyaar ke pal,
    Apni aankhon me tumko chupa lunga main.

    Fir teri yaad sataye mujhe,
    muskurake wo tadpaye mujhe.
    Dobara nahi ayenge kabhi,
    door se hi d!khaye mujhe.

    Ik pal ki aas, teri yaad.
    bulaye paas, teri yaad.

    Na roko mujhe
    (Na roko mujhe)
    Chale jao
    door se hi gungunao tum.

    Na roko mujhe x2
    Na roko mujhex2
  2. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Where is the recording? Nice lines by the way..
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Yes..I'd posted the recording long back on soundclick...
    But refrained from posting here because it is not good quality, and back then I did not know of noise reduction or reverb, equalization. Its just plain recording on a headphone mic.
    I'm still posting the link in the soundtrack forum...
  4. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Okay .. will check it later...
  5. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    i liked it! wil lsay more after listening to the song..
  6. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    good lines...and the music is good too...
  7. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    @metalhead_junky, allstarsband
    thanks dudes!
    I'm onto some more songs these days...hope they turn out good
  8. Ali Yawar

    Ali Yawar New Member

    hey....horsemouth....this is some great stuff...great dude....kafi accha likha hai..
  9. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    thanks dude! which means good that I shared it

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