a wave..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, May 1, 2014.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    it was one unfeeling wave
    as harsh as it could be
    an indicative of a storm
    its unceremonious rise and fall uncalled for ..
    spoke of its ill- bred upbringing
    its turbulent nature caused another storm
    another one in the bed of the sea
    its parenting was in the chancery
    its values put to question
    it had no choice ..
    no choice at all
    but to bear its little one in its vast lap
    to ruffle its hair
    to hold its cheek
    to teach it a lesson for life..
    to keep it in check ..
    what more could it do ?
    should she blame herself
    for letting go ?
    should she praise herself
    for holding it back ?
    it was a dilemma
    she couldn't handle..
    it was a dilemma
    that she was to face
    with each rowdy high
    with each splashing low ..
    each wave was a question
    each wave was a dilemma
    soaking it further in its acceptance
    soaking it further in its denial ...
  2. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    31 views no replies..
    what has this forum come to!
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    well i replied :)

    and believe me it's great! You're very good!
  4. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    i mean i am sooo disappointed .. i posted after a long time.. :/

    anyways..thanks a lot.. i haven't had the chance to read any of your poems ..
    not been writing much ?
  5. Super-Admin

    Super-Admin Administrator Staff Member

    I'm upset. You've been missing in action !
  6. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    am i being scolded?
    *puppy face*
  7. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Naa, lots of work..
    No time, but I have written a few... I guess I posted one a few months back. And one is coming right now...

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