A TEACHER; a guide, a support!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, May 16, 2006.

  1. #iR@


    won't say anything about this poem... want u guys to comment as always! :) just rote it for all the teachers who have ever taught me... realized their importance in my life! :eek::

     A TEACHER; a guide, a support!

    From the confusions of life
    Till the thunders of frustration
    From the silly mistakes
    Till the streams of tears
    From the joys of victory
    Till the screams of defeat

    A teacher guides u…

    From the first mistake u made
    Till the time u excel
    From the foot writing
    Till ur foolish arguments
    From the opening a chapter
    Till finishing it

    A teacher supports u…

    From the starting time
    Till the dead line
    From the prayers u need
    Till the result
    From the first day at school
    Till u graduate

    A teacher lives for u…

    thx for reading... :cool: comments...
  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Nice thots Hira....:beer:
  3. #iR@


    @ Garima...thx for reading! :)

    hmmm... i guess all the poets r dead on igt these days... just concerned about posting and not reading wat the others have ritten... OR...:think: my work isn't worth wat they wanna read! :eek::
  4. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    You're an awesome writer, Hira. I personally didn't like this because it was too literal and unimaginative.

    Tributes usually are though so it's not really a bad thing.
  5. #iR@


    ^ THX MAN!!!!! :nw: luv it wen ppl give me honest thoughts about ma work! i appreciate it man! :dance:
  6. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Aap ke poem ko padhkar Kabir Das Ji ka ek doha yaad aagaya jo youn hai...:

    Guru Govind Dono Khade kake lagun paya
    Balihari Guru aapne, Govind diyon batay


  7. #iR@


    @ amunush... thx man! didn;t XACTLY get wat u said but i am glad u read my poem! :)
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  8. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    hey - can i ask u fer the copyrights...can i plzzz hand it in fer my school magazine...???:grin:
  9. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    i think teacher GHANTA hote hain .... so maine soocha ki kuch mat keh
    teacher saale kuhd to kuch kar nahi paate .... duniaa ke baare main bakwaas karte rehte hain ... i knw saying something againt the most common belives is a no win situation so no arguments
    vaise the combination of words was okkey babe :)
  10. #iR@


    @ fat_kax... hmmm.... do u actually think its that good ya phir JUST FOUND SOMETHING TO DO WID TEACHERS tou chalo skool magzine mein deyna hai? :think: hehe... yea man sure give it in... i have no issues! :cool: but i am glad u asked first! oh and thx for the reps! :nw:

    @ madhuresh... thx for reading! :)
  11. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    yeah...i agree!
    Good one...

    reps for u girl! :)
  12. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    thanx will hand it wid both our names...<3
  13. #iR@


    @ vini... THXXXXX! :)

    @ fat_kax... anytime man! :cool:
  14. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    hey gal..
    u r writting too many poems..
    btw this was good too.
  15. #iR@


    @ nimisha... thx! nahi just rote these right after ma xams... hehe
  16. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    A teacher teaches you!!! why its missing...
  17. #iR@


    ^ didn't xactly get ur point... plzz xplain wat u r trying to say... thx for reading though! :)
  18. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Oye, just you listen. You are one of the best poets on this website, alright? Irrespective of the fact whether us deadbeats post or not. I'm sorry i didnt come across this thing till today, lots of other things on my mind. And i'll be darn honest, this isnt one of your better poems. When mingling reality with poetry, as bjr so mundanely points out, it becomes literal thus reducing the overall appeal and effect of the poem. Keep writing and whenever you want a critique from me give me a knock on my head (message me i mean)
  19. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    I also pointed out Hira is one of two people on the forum whose writing I adore :'(
  20. #iR@


    @ disturbed... yaar u made ma day i swear... ITNI TAREEF meri koi nahi kerta i mean POETRY ... i feel great! thx a lot man,... trust me it just for ppl like u that i rite! EVERY ONE ON IGT ROCKS!!!!!! thx man! :)

    @ brj... thx a LOT! u guys make me feel on top of teh world i swear! :rule: THXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxx!!!!!!!!!!! :rule:

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