A TEACHER; a guide, a support!

won't say anything about this poem... want u guys to comment as always! just rote it for all the teachers who have ever taught me... realized their importance in my life! :

 A TEACHER; a guide, a support!


From the confusions of life
Till the thunders of frustration
From the silly mistakes
Till the streams of tears
From the joys of victory
Till the screams of defeat

A teacher guides u…

From the first mistake u made
Till the time u excel
From the foot writing
Till ur foolish arguments
From the opening a chapter
Till finishing it

A teacher supports u…

From the starting time
Till the dead line
From the prayers u need
Till the result
From the first day at school
Till u graduate

A teacher lives for u…

thx for reading... comments...

 

Nice thots Hira....:beer:

 

@ Garima...thx for reading!




hmmm... i guess all the poets r dead on igt these days... just concerned about posting and not reading wat the others have ritten... OR...:think: my work isn't worth wat they wanna read! :

 

You're an awesome writer, Hira. I personally didn't like this because it was too literal and unimaginative.


Tributes usually are though so it's not really a bad thing.

 

^ THX MAN!!!!! :nw: luv it wen ppl give me honest thoughts about ma work! i appreciate it man! :dance:

 

Aap ke poem ko padhkar Kabir Das Ji ka ek doha yaad aagaya jo youn hai...:

Guru Govind Dono Khade kake lagun paya
Balihari Guru aapne, Govind diyon batay

Amanush...

 

@ amunush... thx man! didn;t XACTLY get wat u said but i am glad u read my poem!

 

hey - can i ask u fer the copyrights...can i plzzz hand it in fer my school magazine...???:grin:

 

i think teacher GHANTA hote hain .... so maine soocha ki kuch mat keh
teacher saale kuhd to kuch kar nahi paate .... duniaa ke baare main bakwaas karte rehte hain ... i knw saying something againt the most common belives is a no win situation so no arguments
vaise the combination of words was okkey babe

 

@ fat_kax... hmmm.... do u actually think its that good ya phir JUST FOUND SOMETHING TO DO WID TEACHERS tou chalo skool magzine mein deyna hai? :think: hehe... yea man sure give it in... i have no issues! but i am glad u asked first! oh and thx for the reps! :nw:

@ madhuresh... thx for reading!

 

yeah...i agree!
Good one...

reps for u girl!

 

thanx will hand it wid both our names...<3

 

@ vini... THXXXXX!

@ fat_kax... anytime man!

 

hey gal..
u r writting too many poems..
btw this was good too.

 

@ nimisha... thx! nahi just rote these right after ma xams... hehe

 

A teacher teaches you!!! why its missing...

 

^ didn't xactly get ur point... plzz xplain wat u r trying to say... thx for reading though!

 

Oye, just you listen. You are one of the best poets on this website, alright? Irrespective of the fact whether us deadbeats post or not. I'm sorry i didnt come across this thing till today, lots of other things on my mind. And i'll be darn honest, this isnt one of your better poems. When mingling reality with poetry, as bjr so mundanely points out, it becomes literal thus reducing the overall appeal and effect of the poem. Keep writing and whenever you want a critique from me give me a knock on my head (message me i mean)

 

I also pointed out Hira is one of two people on the forum whose writing I adore :'(

 

@ disturbed... yaar u made ma day i swear... ITNI TAREEF meri koi nahi kerta i mean POETRY ... i feel great! thx a lot man,... trust me it just for ppl like u that i rite! EVERY ONE ON IGT ROCKS!!!!!! thx man!

@ brj... thx a LOT! u guys make me feel on top of teh world i swear! :rule: THXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxx!!!!!!!!!!! :rule: