A small song(written by me)

Hey Guys! I've been a silent watcher here from quite some time now.I just thought i'd post something here.

Well, this is something i wrote and recorded (My first song technically) a few months ago with 2 of my friends.We've used 2 acoustic guitars N a distorted guitar...The recording is done on a PC so its not really that good.

Thats pretty much all of it i guess,Tell me what you guys think...N please go easy on me...LOL

Thanks!

https://soundclick.com/share?songid=697318

 

Is it smaller than angel's dick?

 

looks like this forum has been infected too!!

anyways about your song....

was a nice intro riff......slightly raise the volume of the vocals and post it....then i'll give my review.....cuz the vocals are barely audible....

 

the distortion shud nt have come in...does nt go with the tone of the song...the intro riff s totally acoustic types...like jack johnson or smthng...distortion just does nt go...hope you know wat i mean..cud nt hear the vocals one bit so cant comment there...the bridge sounds nice..dint like the solo too much...its a great effort though..overall its pretty cool...but then who am i to judge..never composed a song of my own..hehe...kudos on the effort...keep em coming

 

SO you didn't like distortion, the vocals were barely audible and the solo sucked. But it's still a great effort.

Wonder why I don't post anything here.......

 

^And plus "overall it's pretty cool"

lol.

 

heads up to everyone here: dont pay attention to the posts of augur and elf

 

They have a pretty fair point here, I would say.

 

it is certainly smaller dan ur manboobs........

 

My manboobs are non-existent... like your erection.

 

You forgot kudos to the effort and keep em coming.

Why would you want to keep em coming? So you could give him/her some more of your "constructive criticism"? Do 95% of the people here even understand what that means?



Mazic_man: I haven't heard your song.

 

Link doesn't work!!!