A Selfish Heart

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by shanky666_, Jan 2, 2006.

  1. shanky666_

    shanky666_ New Member

    Well Hi to all & wish you all a very happy & prosperous new year. Its after a long time again that i'm here. To pour some thoughts of mine in this world of actively thoughtful people. Here I go with some lines that I have written recently while on my way back home from work when it was late night.

    Like everyday out,
    I'm rushing home today,
    I've done the job,
    relaxed! I smoke all the way.

    And there stands a girl,
    with a baby on her chest,
    & she hugs him close,
    as close as they can get.

    It's cold out for them,
    but I've got a heater in my car,
    they look all broken,
    And I don't have a scar.

    She walks down to me,
    And I turn my face,
    She knocks on the glass,
    butI've got to race.

    The baby clutches her tight,
    out of cold he cries,
    but all I cared about then,
    was the traffic lights.

    She spread her palm for alms,
    but how SELFISH of me,
    I knew she needs my help,
    but I didn't give a penny.

    A poet's heart is soft,
    & I do write sometimes,
    but I hide my own needs,
    behind my every line.

    How SELFISH of me!!!
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    good to 'see' u :)

    nice poem, but i think what u did is right. It probably wasnt even her own child, probably got the kid 'on rent' to make it easier to get money. it happens...
  3. Bleeding Guitar

    Bleeding Guitar New Member

    shyt happnz but theres alwayz a next time :)
    so open ur arms wide when u can do so, otherwise God is there to see whos needy and whoz acting all the way hope u got ma point.
  4. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Nice poem.. I can relate with the emotions very well... What cryptic angel says could be right, but still it doesn't make you feel any better.
  5. shanky666_

    shanky666_ New Member

    tell u what my girl-----friend said on this, she said that the girl shud've looked at the one in me with a penny of warm & care, nut she didn't. :) thnx for the time u took for me. keep them coming.
  6. #iR@


    good poem... it's very nice that u hve ritten about something from ur daily life and it actually happens wid everyone
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    a borrowed child is not a child....hmm
  8. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^^a borrowed child is ofcourse a child, but giving money would only encourage this sort of thng
  9. ElysiaN

    ElysiaN d@Rk\/\/@|\|deReR

    a true expression....child may not be borrowed..... but helping by a rupee is certainly not a solution....dunno what cud be done....
    neways gr8 work...at least made people think bout this...
  10. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

  11. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Nice poem Shanky...now i think m selfish too:think: :think:....
  12. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e &lt;3V/S&lt;3 50 CeNt$

    nice 1.........well i was a biker in mumbai dun no how selfish i av bin (B)
  13. shanky666_

    shanky666_ New Member

    thanks all for yout time again

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