A Poetry on Nothing

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by horsesmouth, Sep 1, 2010.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Ah! Long time not posted anything. Here I go..

    We could say that few things, which are the most important in our lives, cannot be expressed in words. So we sometimes start speaking of things that are'nt related, but just comfort us, hoping they will suffice. So here's my poetry on nothing. Just to express few things about love, longing, distances, and a connection of the souls we just can't relate.

    For a few things in a simple world,
    words cannot say you as you are.
    Be it love, longing, or your touch,
    or your world that lies so far.
    And the times they just lose their wing
    You begin to write, your poetry on nothing.

    A thousand miles for a serene kiss,
    A thousand more for the homely bliss.
    A tiny second spent in togetherness,
    and a million more in emptiness.

    I wished there were no distances,
    to tell our souls apart.
    And nothing can measure a sorrow's width,
    that spreads from within my heart.

    Trees and shadows, and warmth from the sun,
    join two hearts in boundless joy.
    And I know what sings from you,
    and I see what your eyes can see.
    But my words fail to speak,
    all that's sung from your mind;
    And my eyes fail to see,
    all that lies beyond you.

    So I write my poetry on nothing,
    of the trees, sun and the silken dew.
    Because mere ordinary words cannot fathom,
    The love I always hold for you.
  2. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    :') :') :')
    my reply could just be....a standing ovation :)
    u r always awesome...what more can i say?
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    :) :) thanku dear :) thanku so much :) :)
  4. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    i fully agree wid sukriti...u actually r amazin'...!!! lovely..!! <3 <3
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    owww...thanku dear..long time..i thought i got rusted...
  6. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    you're like an old wine dude... the older the better... how can u get rusted? :)
    Good Job !!!
  7. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ahh...what can i say..I'm honoured...thanks.. :)
  8. avi.singh

    avi.singh 6 strings lover

    now..no word for U dude...really its..gr8..!! easily speaking about hard things..!!
  9. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    it really is so difficult to write poetry, recently i tried but it felt to kiddish
    wow dude, you are really the best here !
  10. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    you're really one great poet...hats off to you again!
    hope i can rep it!
  11. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    @avi_singh, metalhead_junky, allstarsband

    Heyall, thanks so much, all of you!
    I did'nt know people are still reading it. This forum is worse than dead.
  12. komal29

    komal29 New Member

    very nice .....
  13. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Ahhh,..revival, remniscience...good ol times..
    So many thanks ...

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