A Glimps Of The Future?

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Jan 11, 2006.

  1. #iR@


    hello...... yes yes ANOTEHR POEM..... could be horrible or it could be n improvement... i HAVE NO IDEA! i want u guys to decide :eek:: well this one's about a problem i think about every day... but now it is SERIOUSLY TAKING OVER MY LIFE! i just can't decide where my life is gonna end up.... i am just CONFUSED! (why won't i be i am a gemini afterall! hehe) anyway... plzz just give me an HONEST opinion about this and tell me a solution if u can! here goes....

    --> a glimps of the future?

    staring at the stars all nite
    caught up in a confusion that has taken over my mind
    i try figuring out wat i have to do in life

    i think, i search, i wonder
    why the child sheds a tear for his mother
    why the mother sheds a tear for his child

    i think, i search, i wonder
    why we live a life we all don't wanna live
    why we waste our time in this crowd (world)

    my thoughts start floating in the past
    how ppl came and went
    how there was bloodshed, comptetion and victory

    but the question still remains unanswered
    wat do i do in this world
    in this crowd of ppl i don't know

    will my soul just depart from this world unanswered?
    or will i be among the ones...
    whose names r engraved in the pages of history?

    each second completes a minute
    each mintue completes an hour
    each hour completes a day
    every day completes a LIFETIME!

    every second that passes by
    reminds me i am close to my end
    i don't wanna regret
    all i need is help!

    i have chosen the name of the poem "a glimps of teh future?" cause thats wat i wanna do... i wanna go to my future, have a look at wat i WILL do and NOW START DOING IT PROPERLY!

    thanks for reading all of u:) well if u sersiouly think about wat this poem ACTUALLY means u might find a problem that all of u must have faced ONCE in ur life....anyways.... don't forget to comment! waiting......
    dennis, vini and Garima like this.
  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    once??? gurl...itz evryday i go thru the same thng.....

    :shock: it seems that all Gemini ppl r confused......me tooooo....same pinch

    & ya reps coming ur way<if i cud>
  3. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    i dont quite remember ur other poems..

    but keeping them aside..i found this very well written and expressed..but im sure u must've improved :)

    ur just a teenager..its for us to worry about future..not u! :grin:

    reps comin ur way
  4. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    rite :eek::
  5. #iR@


    @ garima... thanks... cool u r a gemini too! :) nice to know that!

    @ vini .. never got a reply from u in any of my poems as far as i can remember but thanks a lot! :)
  6. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    hmmm....ur spending too much time on CNN

    nice poem...

    but go back to dreaming and stop worrying about the future at this age

    btw..im in love with ur avatar
  7. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    yeah...nowdays im more active in this forum comparatively

    keep posting more of ur work and rest assured ur gonna get feedback from me
  8. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    nice poem hira, but chill gurl! dont worry so much!! u'll realise which way u wanna go, dont let the present pass u by while u worry abt the future! enjoy these teenagey days n u'll be just fine :)
  9. #iR@


    @ wizard..... thanks man! recieving a feedback on my poems from u after quiet a while..... anyway thanks and yea i know u like my avatar after i got reps from u regarding my avatar! :p: thanks!

    @ crypitic... thanks gurl.. but i just don't have a control over my thoughts i think no one does.... but ofcourse teenage years mein tu shughal he ker rahi hoon! ;)
  10. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Life is what happens to you....When you were busy making plans.

    So dont plan...just Live :)
  11. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    yeah...have not been regular here....
    almost same kinda stuff being posted... :(

    again.....ur avatar is badass :nw:

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