hello...... yes yes ANOTEHR POEM..... could be horrible or it could be n improvement... i HAVE NO IDEA! i want u guys to decide : well this one's about a problem i think about every day... but now it is SERIOUSLY TAKING OVER MY LIFE! i just can't decide where my life is gonna end up.... i am just CONFUSED! (why won't i be i am a gemini afterall! hehe) anyway... plzz just give me an HONEST opinion about this and tell me a solution if u can! here goes.... --> a glimps of the future? staring at the stars all nite caught up in a confusion that has taken over my mind i try figuring out wat i have to do in life i think, i search, i wonder why the child sheds a tear for his mother why the mother sheds a tear for his child i think, i search, i wonder why we live a life we all don't wanna live why we waste our time in this crowd (world) my thoughts start floating in the past how ppl came and went how there was bloodshed, comptetion and victory but the question still remains unanswered wat do i do in this world in this crowd of ppl i don't know will my soul just depart from this world unanswered? or will i be among the ones... whose names r engraved in the pages of history? each second completes a minute each mintue completes an hour each hour completes a day every day completes a LIFETIME! every second that passes by reminds me i am close to my end i don't wanna regret all i need is help! i have chosen the name of the poem "a glimps of teh future?" cause thats wat i wanna do... i wanna go to my future, have a look at wat i WILL do and NOW START DOING IT PROPERLY! thanks for reading all of u well if u sersiouly think about wat this poem ACTUALLY means u might find a problem that all of u must have faced ONCE in ur life....anyways.... don't forget to comment! waiting......
once??? gurl...itz evryday i go thru the same thng..... :shock: it seems that all Gemini ppl r confused......me tooooo....same pinch & ya reps coming ur way<if i cud>
i dont quite remember ur other poems.. but keeping them aside..i found this very well written and expressed..but im sure u must've improved ur just a teenager..its for us to worry about future..not u! :grin: reps comin ur way
@ garima... thanks... cool u r a gemini too! nice to know that! @ vini .. never got a reply from u in any of my poems as far as i can remember but thanks a lot!
hmmm....ur spending too much time on CNN nice poem... but go back to dreaming and stop worrying about the future at this age btw..im in love with ur avatar
yeah...nowdays im more active in this forum comparatively keep posting more of ur work and rest assured ur gonna get feedback from me
nice poem hira, but chill gurl! dont worry so much!! u'll realise which way u wanna go, dont let the present pass u by while u worry abt the future! enjoy these teenagey days n u'll be just fine
@ wizard..... thanks man! recieving a feedback on my poems from u after quiet a while..... anyway thanks and yea i know u like my avatar after i got reps from u regarding my avatar! : thanks! @ crypitic... thanks gurl.. but i just don't have a control over my thoughts i think no one does.... but ofcourse teenage years mein tu shughal he ker rahi hoon!
yeah...have not been regular here.... almost same kinda stuff being posted... again.....ur avatar is badass :nw:
