A Feeling Undefined....

A FEELING UNDEFINED……



I don’t know what it is, I don’t know what I m going through,
All I know is that it’s an emotion very true.

Still I convinced myself to jot it down in my words,
Your genuineity & being yourself is the first thing I just fell towards.

I m pleasantly surprised, how much you know me inside out,
There’s surely some connection, without any doubt.

I want the whole world to know whatever I feel,
But to divulge it to you, my lips are sealed.

I don’t know what’s with me, why I suddenly feel so good,
But I persuade myself to keep mum, yes, I should.

People say whatever I feel, should be without any condition,
I say, I have one, ‘WE’ in any situation.

Here I am, wrestling with my own feelings….does it needs any explanation, any reason?
All I have to say it’s not something that’s gonna change with the season….

There’s this something that’s always on my mind,
It’s my very own, A FEELING UNDEFINED……






## copyright @ 2007.
himanshi...

~ anshammer.inc

 

hey??????? no reply?!?!!...

 

sahi thi be !...its different surely !

feelings shud be expressed and thats what u did...add Peace at the end

 

Did this Himanshi person write this?

 

A FEELING UNDEFINED.... great concept!!
good flow.. but poem feels bit lacking.. may be title was too demanding.
so needed some elaboration or deep thinking..
anyways this simple version is also praiseworthy..having said it could have been awesome with more efforts..
u get my reps for sure!

 

hey...thnk u guyz so much... ......
hmmm...will try 2 write more....


take care.!!...

 

the idea is hatke ... could have been written better ... but a nice read anyways ... REPS added

 

hmmm..you know, you have potential...keep writing..you'll definitely get better:beer:

In the entire poem I found these lines that actually reflect the potential..
I want the whole world to know whatever I feel,
But to divulge it to you, my lips are sealed.

Definitely a poetic spark...the rest was,well,you can do better...

:dance:

 

hey...thanks soooooooo much.. ...

thnx readin n likin it..

take care.!!!

 

u knw.....himanshi...JUMBLE....nimisha with extra h...jsut a thought
and u know hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
....................................................................................
;=(()?*()*()*()
this
an take care tc tata bye

IS All too much in u, itni bakwass karega to feeling ki to bains- ki - ankh ho jayegi na lol

lol

 

ahem ahem..... i hope..u were here 2 b read the poetry.....!!

n waise..bhi... ure feelin ki bains-ki-ank hone se...wotz wrong??..! hmm??...

newyz... fine.. no more.. " take care. " and "" hmm ""

happy???..

chalo....now...its ure time 2 pen down a poem.... n lemme see...how deep bains ki ank feelin u got.!!! oki???

# sorrie.. 4 da language.....

tchao..
um abraco.!

 

^wtf!?

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oops...xcuse..me??..... u asking me??... :O

or... OUR..mrr.. madhuresh??.... .. hehe..
dunno..wots wrong... waise..bhi cant help it...elf.

 

I had not seen your post and it was for M(s)ister Madhuresh but now I realize it fits for both.

 

hmmmmmm.!!!!!!!!!... :| ... k k.... verry funny.!!!!!

hey..was dat funny??.. .....!!

newyz,...!! thnx 4 readin though.... hehe...

 

hey....el.... dat..was for my poem.. or..my last.reply 2.. madhuresh??? hmM???

 

oye what i wanted to put across was that u seem so confused in your normal talks then its like obvious taht u will have this kinda feeeling !
i dont know wht u go of my words ... just ignore my comments ( actually main isse bhi aisa likhta .....u think i am transparent plain glass)
u see i am not good at expressions !
for ur challange............................i loose mere expressions ki Vaat hi lag jati hai
being ur first attempt tera poem accha tha ... tekiyaro man tekiyaro !

 

hey...dats.. k ... no problemo... ure free 2 express..da way u want..

n am sorrie.... shayad i reacted in a wierd way..!!!

tchao....!

 

This is the the fifth time in two days that I'm seeing this slip by different people around the web.

I think it's the most common and irritating mistake one makes.

It's not LOOSE but LOSE, as in LOSER which you seem to be anyway.

 

control man even my mercy has limits !