A Choice

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by horsesmouth, Dec 30, 2009.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Its a decision, seems effortless,
    a choice between you and you.
    Both next to me, close by me,
    but my thoughts are running few.

    Its not an easy option,
    and my mind is overtaken
    by pointless desperate counts,
    but I guess again I'm mistaken.

    Both are my own faces,
    but fall on parting ways.
    These paths lead me nowhere,
    and thoughts I often chase
    to impossible ends and failed bonds.
    Its time I reclaimed myself,
    from thoughtless search and endless wars.

    I wish you could be here,
    I'd put you right away.
    In my ways to be forever,
    in peace and truthful bliss.
    Why could'nt you be together?
    part of the endless seas.

    My faith's never been bad,
    forever, its bound to you.
    But if I'd make a choice,
    I'd wish to run askew.
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    wow... i mean truely effortless and gud poetry

    nice poem man, keep psoting
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Wow! I'd neva read ur comments man, i gues only u wer alive tht time! lol
    me and your poems seemed to fill up almost the whole page...until i commented tday!
  4. soumya256

    soumya256 New Member

    waaaooo !!
    realy btful :)
    nyc work
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    thanks dear....long tym seen u ol.... :)
  6. soumya256

    soumya256 New Member

    yaaa......... :)
  7. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    Really nice...your poems really verge on the feminine side...emotional i guess...
    but too good!

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