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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Feb 8, 2012.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    sometimes, all of a sudden i tend to feel so incomplete..
    lying down with my remorse .. hugging to my defeats ..
    i am lit and..i burn .. but without any heat..without any flame..
    i suffocate and i struggle in the arms of my defeater ..sighing his name ..
    there are times when you are so far yet so close...so close yet so far ..
    i shut down the windows to my brain and set the door of my heart ajar ..
    i am cold ..my face is white as a sheet..
    petrified yet expectant i am..my future..i want to meet
    digging my nails deep into the soulless bed..
    inside i feel like its an explosion of red..
    getting numb with each breath .. feeling alive with each touch ..
    filling you in me..feeling you with me while i moan..while i clutch ..

    and suddenly i enter in a new world..world that i am unaware of.. world that holds fantasies many
    world that seems to know all my answers..breathing into me and completing me without actually telling me any..
    and then i feel no need to know anything further
    and then i feel all those dreams that i nurture
    and then i seek no answers..and then i have no questions
    and then i set free to fly high..without standing on any queer notions
    i cry out loud..brimming with ecstasy ..
    shutting my eyes and trying not to believe at my destiny..
    still shuddering in the arms of my enemy
    but there is a difference, and it is that .. now i am complete.. now i am at ease.. now my white face gleams
    now i am full .. now i am not tired.. now i shut my eyes and i sleep .. in the lap of beautiful and happy dreams

    i am satisfied..
     
  2. mymusicmyguitar

    mymusicmyguitar New Member

    Wow........
     
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thank you :)
     
  4. its a very true feeling that you expressed without much ado

    good one !!
     
  5. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thank u :)
     
  6. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Hows this:

    lying down ..
    i am lit and..i burn .. but without any heat..without any flame..
    digging my nails deep into the soulless bed..
    inside i feel like its an explosion of red..
    getting numb with each breath .. feeling alive with each touch ..
    filling you in me..feeling you with me while i moan..while i clutch ..

    i cry out loud..brimming with ecstasy ..
    shutting my eyes and trying not to believe at my destiny..
    still shuddering
    .. now i am complete.. now i am at ease.. now my white face gleams
    now i am full .. now i am not tired.. now i shut my eyes and i sleep .. in the lap of beautiful and happy dreams

    i am satisfied..

    ;-)
     
  7. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    once i asked you a question...do you ever think about anything else.. ?
    now i really don't find a need to ask that question any more.. :p :D hahaha
     
  8. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Those are YOUR WORDS.
     
  9. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    and that is YOUR DIRTY MIND AND YOUR INTERPRETATION..!
     
  10. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    just sleep together already...you could cut the ***ual tension in the air with a knife.
     
  11. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    <:RollLol:>
     
  12. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member


    . . .. . . . ... :| !!!!
     
  13. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member


    <:RollLol:>
    careful...don't bang your head somewhere.. :\
     
  14. Rocean

    Rocean New Member

    >>>>seriously touchd in deep...!!
     
  15. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thank you :)
     

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